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Zarmala Khan
Zarmala Khan
Aps Westridge 3
Tick Tock.dead
Published On Oct 19th 2014
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On a beautiful, yet deserted patch of land.......a hostel was built. it got quite rich and had many rooms and gardens. However, the students outnumbered the rooms and there was much competition.
One rich girl, also in the competition....got hold of a room. it was quite messy and out of order but it was better than none. so she moved in..........but on the day of her first art class, she slept her last night for her body was found lying on her bed and there was a really bad cut on her throat.....she was dead!
After that, students avoided that room but one day, a poor girl, really wanting to study, begged to stay for free in that room. The principal allowed her after she had promised to solve the mystery of that room.
She didn't sleep in that room...she left a camera there, and on the bed...a doll. What was recorded was unbelievable; on 11o clock, the windows opened all by themselves, and then shut. as it turned 12,all sounds silenced...except that of...tick tock tick tock...the old grandfather clock, and then, even more...a knife on top of the clock came flying towards the doll and sliced it open! this was horrifying and a man was called who was an expert about ghosts.
The man stayed in that room on the day of art class and by 11 stepped into the clock! To his surprise there was enough space to build a mansion! What he saw was even scarier...a ghost of a girl standing there....looking happy...
'hello hersh.' said the ghost.
 
'how do you know my name? and why are you killing all those kids? thats' not right!'
'and what happened to me, was that right?'
'what happened?'asked hersh.
'i was talented in arts, but some jealous girls killed me with a knife and threw my body into this clock where i have no one to play....will you play with me?'
'yes.' hersh said, he had an idea and said, 'we'll play hide and seek.'
The ghost was pleased. Harsh allowed her for it was all according to plan. as the ghost began to count, hersh pulled down a chain and damaged the clock. with the clock stopped, the ghost gave out one last scream....and never did strange things happen in that room again.......thanks to hersh.
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Comments 11
Urooj Gudd😃 Urooj
Jul 18th 2017
 
 
abeera Cool n scary...i never see aahat soooo.... Abeera
Feb 25th 2015
 
 
Shaheer Yeah fatimas rightooo Shaheer
Dec 31st 2015
 
 
jasmine Super Jasmine
Dec 29th 2015
 
 
Khadija Cheater cheater Khadija
Dec 18th 2014
 
 
Fatima It is the cheating of AAHAT!!!! Fatima
Dec 2nd 2014
 
 
Laibah I like it Laibah
Nov 15th 2014
 
 
Syeda Zuha Well written***** Syeda Zuha
Nov 10th 2014
 
 
Fatima Bintey It's a great effort in the story has been cheated from AAHAT and the topic from GOOSBUMPS otherwise you're de GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fatima Bintey
Oct 28th 2014
 
 
Fatima Bintey It's a great effort in the story has been cheated from AAHAT and the topic from GOOSBUMPS otherwise you're de GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fatima Bintey
Oct 28th 2014
 
 
zalan Wonderfull Zalan
Oct 28th 2014
 
 

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