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Mdfah Zahid
Mdfah Zahid
Jinnah Highs
The Great Child Detective
Published On May 31st 2011
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“I just can’t understand how they did it” said the inspector. The world’s famous detective, Hassan, was also puzzled. There had been a robbery at the jewelry shop. And Hassan was worried; at last he said “We should take an interview”. There were only three people who worked at the shop but their families were also being interviewed. After many hours they gave up. Amna, the detective’s daughter said” “I know who did it” who? Who? ”Came the reply.”You see when you interviewed the guard and his sons everyone was nervous, all except James, he just replied “I was watching the late night show with a friend. But there was no late night show due to the breaking news of a bomb”. The two men just stared at the child with an air of admiration. The police was called and the family was taken to prison.
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Comments 4
Ajwa This is the best story i have ever read Ajwa
Jun 24th 2011
mdfah I know it is short but i didnt want it to be long becase people say when will this story end to nice long stories Mdfah
Jun 4th 2011
Tooba Nice but short Tooba
Jun 1st 2011
Muhammad Nice start but you should have completed the story? Muhammad
May 31st 2011

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