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Maryam Aamir
Maryam Aamir
Notorious Room (last Part)
Published On Sep 12th 2014
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I knew Arlene was hiding a big secret. So I invited Arlene to the same coffee shop. I had a thought somewhere in my mind that I should talk her directly and clearly not in clues.
For the first time Arlene was right on time. She wore a pink dress; her hairs were tied in a five strand braid resting on her left shoulder. I thought she would attend a party after the coffee.
 “I know Arlene. You can’t hide any secret you have to tell me the whole reality.” I said.
“No! I didn’t know anything.” She replied.
“See you have 2 choices. 1 to tell me the truth or the other is…. I will not leave the room.” I gave her a kind of warning.
“Okay! I don’t know the whole story but I know something that might help you.”
“What?”
“2 years ago I stayed in a room which is right before your notorious room. Sarah had notorious room and we were friends, perhaps good friends. But one day her corpse was found resting on bed. She was put to death by means of poison. As she was an orphan and accused girl was rich, her case was changed to suicide. From that day till now everyone who stayed in that room was found dead on 30th day.” She told me a sad story.
“I feel bad for her.” I said with sorrow.
*******************
It was 3:00 am when I met Sarah again. Before she could say any word I questioned her “Can I ask you a Question?”
“Yes you can?”
 “Would you like to tell me your story?” She replied as she was waiting for me to ask her. She told me a sad saga.
“I was a brilliant student. A girl named Jessica had a war of grades with me and don’t know it. She becomes my friend and I thought she is my best friend but she was worst enemy. 30 days before the exams she came to my room to celebrate a year of our friendship with tow homemade cupcakes. My cupcake was poisoned.”
“Why she did that? I mean she do a lots of hard work for good grades.”
“Everyone has two choices, two paths and two ways good and bad, hard and easy. It’s on you which one you choose. Hard work was hard and giving poison to someone was easy.” She said.
“Sam wake up Sam” It was Arlene’s voice.
“How did you come in my room?” I asked her.
“The room was unlocked.”She replied.
“Really?” I asked her again.
“don’t waste your time we have to go to college.” She said.
I remembered that I met Sarah last night. It all felt like a dream. Later that day I left the ‘Notorious Room’ forever.
THE END
 (P.S: Please share your thoughts after reading the end.)
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Comments 45
Nimra Heya :* Mid terms starting from 13th dec. Coming tuesday 22nd nov is my birthday do remember bro :'D but sad life, its my paper on my birthday. :/ Nimra
Nov 18th 2016
 
 
sajahir Very interesting story Sajahir
Nov 13th 2016
 
 
Bushra Hafeez Nice :) Bushra Hafeez
Oct 6th 2016
 
 
Nimra No problem i'm always there.Anytime anything for you. :) Nimra
Jun 5th 2016
 
 
Maryam Miss u too dear. and thank you so much for encouraging me. :)) Maryam
May 31st 2016
 
 
Nimra I liked all the parts and loved reading them. :D Very nice writing skills honeyy!:* Miss you darlingg! <33 :/ Nimra
May 10th 2016
 
 
Khadijah Does this has to do with me???? Khadijah
May 12th 2015
 
 
Maryam Thats sad i know u must be missing ur friends but its ok i will be your friend.... :o =) Maryam
May 3rd 2015
 
 
khadija Umm u asking from me? Well i just came in ninth ..so buzy in work ...really ..i also changed my scool cause of aga khan board ..i miss my friends ..how r u? :D Khadija
Apr 22nd 2015
 
 
Maryam Thank you so much Syeda and Fatimah....!!! :o with all my mistakes and imperfections you all appreciated and encouraged me.... I am so glad to be with all my friends... :o :p if you ask for new story so i am working on it... :) :o Maryam
Apr 8th 2015
 
 
Maryam I just thought u know me and I don't.... :) so what are you doing these days???? :o :p Maryam
Apr 8th 2015
 
 
syeda Wonder full!i haven't read a story like this! Syeda
Apr 2nd 2015
 
 
Fatima WoW you are an AwEsOmE writer.....Plz start a new story Fatima
Apr 1st 2015
 
 
khadija U dont need to be confused. ..neither u know me nor i ...so just forget that .... :/ Khadija
Mar 3rd 2015
 
 
Maryam What!?!? I haven't figured out who is Khadija without 'H' is, and now there is Khadijah with 'H':/ =/ Oh yes!!! I remember Khadija with 'H' but I don't know who is Khadija without 'H' :o :p and why she asked me for relatives or friends??? I am so confuseddddd..... Maryam
Mar 1st 2015
 
 
Khadijah ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Khadijah
Feb 27th 2015
 
 
khadija Lolz ! Got ya! :p Khadija
Feb 27th 2015
 
 
khadija Lolz ! Got ya! :p Khadija
Feb 27th 2015
 
 
Maryam No!! but yes!!!, only my sister :)) Maryam
Feb 25th 2015
 
 
Maryam I will try my best to write after my exams... :)) But 1st I have to improve and work hard on my grammar. Maryam
Feb 25th 2015
 
 
khadija Can you tell me one thing? Is there any of your school friend or relative on this web? :) Khadija
Feb 22nd 2015
 
 
Shaheer Oh! I figured that out. BaD nEws. Shaheer
Feb 21st 2015
 
 
Maryam NO!! Lucifer was not my story it was Fatimah's story. Well!! I have planed to write a story but I haven't figured out the main plot yet... Also I'am thinking the genre of story.... And I have no time right now...!!! Maryam
Feb 20th 2015
 
 
Maryam Thank you so much Areesha for a lovely comment :) :o Maryam
Feb 17th 2015
 
 
Shaheer No more stories coming?? Or are they. BTW Lucifier was written by you?? Shaheer
Feb 17th 2015
 
 
Areesha After a long time,the story ended. nice work Maryam Amir thanks for sharing a gud story with us :-) Areesha
Feb 5th 2015
 
 
Maryam Thank you ADEN and Yussi Assalam o Alaikum!!!! My parents would be proud of me :) :o Maryam
Jan 1st 2015
 
 
yusra Assalam o Alaikum Plz add me as a frnd:) I like your attitude! Yusra
Dec 24th 2014
 
 
Aden WOW Aden
Dec 3rd 2014
 
 
Maryam Yes!!!! I did munkashay and I love it. :))) :o Maryam
Oct 30th 2014
 
 
Munkashay You're welcome! Oh, and have you read my story's 5th part? Chuunin Exams have started! And I also made your team. Munkashay
Oct 23rd 2014
 
 
Maryam Why you wrote my comment again??? Maryam
Oct 15th 2014
 
 
Taj - thanx Munkashay once again!!!!!!! :o) :D Taj
Oct 11th 2014
 
 
Maryam Thanx Munkashay once again!!!!!!! :o) :D Maryam
Oct 2nd 2014
 
 
Maryam I knew they were not =/ Maryam
Sep 28th 2014
 
 
Amn Wow seriously all parts were amazing Amn
Sep 26th 2014
 
 
Maryam Lol I don't know the spelling of TWO :o =/ Maryam
Sep 23rd 2014
 
 
Maryam Thanks every one. :o) @ Shehram: it is kind of supernatural story. @Amn: I wish I could too. @ Zarmala: one thing I must say English errors = me and I am also glad to have a friend like you. :p :o Maryam
Sep 23rd 2014
 
 
Munkashay WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWW!!! Munkashay
Sep 23rd 2014
 
 
zarmala SUCH A CREATIVE STORY!I'M GLAD I HAVE SUCH A GREAT AND GENIOUSE FRIEND! Zarmala
Sep 21st 2014
 
 
Amn Wow I wish I could meet a soul like that and the story is pretty good Amn
Sep 16th 2014
 
 
Munkashay GOOOOD!! Munkashay
Sep 14th 2014
 
 
shehram Dont mind plz but there is something i dont get . Is it a supernatural story? Shehram
Sep 13th 2014
 
 
Laibah Oh, and by the way, FINALLY! i've been waiting for it since last month!!!!!!!!!!!! Laibah
Sep 12th 2014
 
 
Laibah Nice ending. Laibah
Sep 12th 2014
 
 

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