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Hairbeyar Baloch
Hairbeyar Baloch
Lahore Grammer School
My Best Friend
Published On Sep 17th 2014
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Once upon a time I was six years old. I use to go with my father. I went for hunting in forest there was very frost then my father hunt a big Dear when I was hunting the goat. Goat was run at me and then one lion baby help me and my father. Then I thanks to the baby lion he said you are my best friend I said yes then I said can you came at my home. The baby lion said yes but he said I was very hungry. I said I will gave you meat said that’s all right. The baby lion said I can sleep here then he becomes my best friend then one day the baby lion was very hungry I gave him all the meat which I have. Then the baby lion become a full lion then one day lion very hungry he go and eating the people but I kill him. I was very upset I am crying suddenly he not dead I take him to the hospital then doctor said he did not dead. The lion very beautiful like me his hair was very longer like me. We went for picnic we eat pizza and hot-n-chilli roll and we drank pepsi we all are very glad and this all happen in my dream.
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Comments 5
raveeha Gud story but there r alot of grammatical mistakes Raveeha
Dec 13th 2014
 
 
aeman Fatima you are right Aeman
Oct 8th 2014
 
 
Fatima  Mehdi What a funny type of English invented by YOU! Fatima Mehdi
Sep 18th 2014
 
 
Ibrahim Send me a friend request in vshine...... Ibrahim
Sep 18th 2014
 
 
Ibrahim Hahaha i really thouht this is a real story,,but not..very nice it is to see your story.....keep writing brother.... Ibrahim
Sep 18th 2014
 
 

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