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Shehram Chaudhry
Shehram Chaudhry
Lahore School Of Learning
Atrocious (part 2)
Published On Sep 18th 2014
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The girls and boys guessed that there was a problem and they had to find the three missing girls as soon as possible. Suddenly they got an idea that maybe there were some bullies in the next forms playing pranks on them. So some of the children took their hockey and lacrosse sticks with them. One of them took a tape. And many other children some other tools like this which they thought could be helpful. They also took some water in case it was needed.
They made three groups consisting of 6 to 7 children. They guessed that there was a trap somewhere cause they had a seen something go down in the floor and then had a heard a voice like that of a trap door. A plan was made. The three groups followed each other but they were not so close together so that if one of the groups falls in trouble the other could help them and see where the trouble was.
Suddenly one of the sensible girls of that form got an idea. To check where the trap was laid the girl hit the lacrosse stick in front of her on the floor so wherever the trap is they can recognize and be careful. At one of the points the lacrosse stick went half in the floor and they saw where the trap was.
To be continued......
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Comments 12
Irza Ooooo cant wait Irza
Nov 5th 2015
Kulsoom Hmmm *:)* Kulsoom
Aug 3rd 2015
ali <_> nice Ali
Dec 24th 2014
saad Hi guys am new here my name is saad Saad
Oct 14th 2014
Fatima Cool story Fatima
Oct 8th 2014
Fatima Nice,good effort and thanks for commenting on my story Fatima
Sep 28th 2014
shehram I live in lahore pakistan Shehram
Sep 27th 2014
Amn In which City u live sheram???? Amn
Sep 24th 2014
Fatima  Mehdi Good! Fatima Mehdi
Sep 24th 2014
shehram Thaku Shehram
Sep 20th 2014
Amn Oooooooo waiting for the next part!!! Amn
Sep 20th 2014
Ibrahim Nice Ibrahim
Sep 20th 2014

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