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Shehram Chaudhry
Shehram Chaudhry
Lahore School Of Learning
Atrocious Part 1
Published On Aug 22nd 2014
Total Comments : 24
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As the bedtime bell rang all the children rushed to their dormitories to have a good night's sleep. There were noises all around until the last of the bedtime bells rang and the children settled in their beds.
This is a story of a boarding school which is somehow in danger read it and find out.
The Scarletrose School was a huge white building surrounded with walled gardens and beautiful flowers. There were some swimming pools and ponds too in the school garden and they had a gym a big play area and some music rooms and so on. The school was famous all over Blacksburgh so Most of the children from nearer towns were in Scarletrose School.
Around 12 o clock in the midnight some strange kind of voices started coming which grew louder and louder as the clock ticked past. Soon most of the children were wide awaked but because the teachers had separate quarters they didn't wake up.
Three brave girls decided to go and check what the cause of the voice was. The voice now was very very loud and it was a haunting voice so the girls and boys were terrified. Suddenly they heard a scream which scared them more. The girls went to their dormitories door and saw outside. Very far ahead they saw a hand going down into the floor and then a voice like that of a door slamming shut. The girls went to the boys dormitory and knocked at the door.
The boys were also wide awake so they opened the door quickly and they let the girls in. Now they were very worried and the girls told that three girls went to check where the voice was coming from and they haven't come till now.
To be Continued...
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Comments 24
Nov 5th 2015
MARYAM Yaar plz write the initial of the surname atleast to whom you are commenting.. it gets so confusing!! Maryam
Aug 7th 2015
MARYAM Yaar plz write the initial of the surname atleast to whom you are commenting.. it gets so confusing!! Maryam
Aug 7th 2015
Kulsoom Niceeee!! Kulsoom
Aug 3rd 2015
Shaheer Ya areesha Shaheer
Feb 10th 2015
Maryam Ok I mean 'Am I the genre of stories?' Maryam
Jan 24th 2015
shehram We like stories maryam for gods sake :P Shehram
Nov 4th 2014
Maryam Do you mean stories like ME???? :) U don't like my story??? Maryam
Oct 2nd 2014
shehram Yea that fool gave the answer and yea i posted the second part Shehram
Sep 27th 2014
Areesha Shahram HuRrY up!!!!! part t w o ! Areesha
Sep 25th 2014
Areesha Shaheer u gave the ans instead of Shahram:P Areesha
Sep 20th 2014
Shaheer LOL. Her real name is Shahram Chaudhry. Shaheer
Sep 16th 2014
M. Me too!!!!!!!!! M.
Sep 13th 2014
Areesha What's ur actual name yaar? im so confused! Areesha
Sep 12th 2014
Areesha Hahaha u also started writing stories like maryam:p Areesha
Sep 12th 2014
shehram Thanxx everyone too bzy these days Shehram
Sep 12th 2014
Mohammad Great Mohammad
Sep 7th 2014
Maimoona Masood It was interesting!!!!!....... Maimoona Masood
Sep 6th 2014
shehram For everyones info this is not to be continued :P Shehram
Aug 28th 2014
Maryam Mention not :o !!!!! Maryam
Aug 27th 2014
shehram LOLZ!!! tHANX Shehram
Aug 27th 2014
Maryam I love horror so I love the story but I think 12:00 is midnight :o) Maryam
Aug 26th 2014
shehram Thnku Shehram
Aug 24th 2014
MARYAM Good but you could believe in yourself and make it more interesting and build more suspense... Maryam
Aug 22nd 2014

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