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Munkashay Hyuuga
Munkashay Hyuuga
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Shumaim And Munkashay In Naruto World (part 2)
Published On Jul 21st 2014
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Munkashay woke up, dazed. She was lying on the ground with Shumaim in a completely unknown(or maybe known) place. Two people were standing close to them but she couldn't make out  who they were.
"Are you okay?" said a worried girl's voice.
"Mm...? Oh, if you could pull me and my sister up..." replied Munkashay. The one who had spoken before gave her a hand and pulled her up. To her extreme shock and surprise, Munkashay saw a familiar girl with short pink hair and green eyes looking at her worriedly. Another blonde-haired and blue-eyed boy was heaving Shumaim up.
"Are you...are you N-N-" stammered Shumaim,"N-NARUTO?"
"Uh...do you know me?" said the boy, Naruto.
"Yeah!" said Munkashay excitedly, determinatedly not bursting out:"WE ARE YOUR FANS;WE LOVE YOU!!"
"And you are Sakura," Shumaim said to the girl.
"I know I am," replied Sakura,"And you are?"
Shumaim remembered the Japanese way of saying surname before the first name."Latif Shumaim," she said,"And Latif Munkashay."
"Hey, me and Naruto were heading to the Ichiraku Ramen Shop," said Sakura,"Care to join us?"
Before Shumaim could say anything, Munkashay said,"You bet!"
"I've never eaten ramen before, I tell you, "she whispered to her sister as they sat in the Shop.The old man who owned it, said," Do you want pork chops in your ramen?"
"N-no, thank you," Shumaim replied tensely. Munkashay nodded.
After eating ramen, Naruto called them.
"C'mon!" he said, "We'll show you our friends!"
"Okay," said Shumaim happily. She expected to meet Team Guy.
"....Team Guy's out for mission, but you don't care, do you?" Naruto was saying.
"HA HA HA!!" Sai laughed."'Sent by saying a code'? HA!"
"Shut up, Sai!"Naruto yelled. Munkashay grinned;it was so nice to have smiling faces all round you. Suddenly Choji asked,"Say, what's on your teeth?" Munkashay clamped her mouth shut: she had shown her braces.
"They are...ummm..."
"Braces?" asked Kurenai. Shumaim nodded, surprised.
"Oh, then," said Ino quickly," We won't provoke you."
Munkashay was about to say thanks when Asuma spoke,"What was the code again?"
Munkashay concentrated." Uh..8..1," she said," Another 1, and 1..then 5...and 1.Yeah, that's it."
"AHA!" Kiba yelled.
"Oh, yes!" said Hinata excitedly.
"Now I get it," Shino said and began explaining:
"We  changed letters into numbers. 811,151 for 'B','I','I'...'I','S','I'.Get it? B for 'Believe', 'I' for 'In', another 'I' for 'It', then again 'It'-"
"Then 'S' for 'Shows'," cut Kiba,"And 'I' for 'Itself'!"
"Believe In It, It Shows Itself," continued Kurenai,"Get it?"
"Team Kurenai planned it," said Hinata," We needed two more Kunoichi, you see!"
"So it means if you believe in us, we'll come!" said Shikamaru. Shumaim nodded happily.
'I get it,' she thought,'We are in Naruto World!'
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Comments 69
Munkashay BTW thanks Elizae ^-^ Munkashay
Mar 6th 2015
 
 
Munkashay Yeah, and the one who has written it has amazing super duper pals who stick for her :)) Munkashay
Feb 23rd 2015
 
 
Farishta Well I guess I dont bother u,Dua,I am talking to one who has written it.;p Farishta
Feb 21st 2015
 
 
elizae Welldone Elizae
Jan 13th 2015
 
 
abeera Goooooooood fatimah.......agreeeee.... Abeera
Jan 8th 2015
 
 
Munkashay I agree with Fatimah! Munkashay
Jan 7th 2015
 
 
fatimah "Naughty naughty gonna get caughty Farista dear, dont be such a pooper, lets us great ppl be. Fatimah
Jan 2nd 2015
 
 
Munkashay ~_~ Munkashay
Jan 1st 2015
 
 
Munkashay SHUT UP FARISHTA!!! Quotev has improved me and it's the best website! If my story's lame, then why do you read it?! Buzz off! Thanks, BTW, Irhum. Munkashay
Dec 10th 2014
 
 
irhum Wow;what a story Irhum
Dec 6th 2014
 
 
Farishta I think quotev have affected u people:} Farishta
Dec 6th 2014
 
 
Farishta The most lamest thing written by someone and one thing more U R DISGRACING NARUTO Farishta
Dec 4th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Thanks, Afifah! Munkashay
Nov 16th 2014
 
 
afifah Good story! Afifah
Nov 12th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Awww, thanks Dua! BTW, my gift has reached! Stationary stuff. Pencil box, instruments box, erasers, glue etc. Munkashay
Oct 20th 2014
 
 
abeera Congrats on winning Munkashay.You totally deserve it :) Abeera
Oct 17th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Yyyyaaaaaayyyyy!!! I can't believe, really! Munkashay
Oct 4th 2014
 
 
Maryam Ur welcome :o) :p Maryam
Oct 2nd 2014
 
 
Munkashay Sure Noor! And thanks you all, thanks!! Munkashay
Sep 27th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Sure Noor! And thanks you all, thanks!! Munkashay
Sep 27th 2014
 
 
huzaifa Great story Huzaifa
Sep 26th 2014
 
 
Shaheer COnratz. O_O_O Shaheer
Sep 24th 2014
 
 
noor Congrats Munkashay!! <3 <3 <3 Hey can i call you Mun-chan and Shumaim can i call you Shu-chan?? Cuz to be honest you guys have pretty long names! (sorry if you guys don't like me saying that! Noor
Sep 23rd 2014
 
 
Maryam I checked part 4 and it is Awesome and congratulation on winning woho :o) :p =) Maryam
Sep 23rd 2014
 
 
Munkashay Thanks! YYAAAAAYYYY I can't believe it! Woo hoo! Munkashay
Sep 22nd 2014
 
 
Ali Congrats on winning Ali
Sep 20th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Oh... Munkashay
Sep 17th 2014
 
 
Shaheer I also wear glasses and the numbers tooo high for you guys. Shaheer
Sep 16th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Check out my Part 4, then! Munkashay
Sep 14th 2014
 
 
Maryam I am sorry too. I was just asking where we are. don't want you to handle so many characters. Maryam
Sep 12th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Me hopes too ;) Thanks, Fahad! Munkashay
Sep 8th 2014
 
 
Mohammad Nyc Mohammad
Sep 7th 2014
 
 
noor Send* Noor
Sep 2nd 2014
 
 
noor Oh and i sended the story so i hope they post it! :/ Noor
Sep 2nd 2014
 
 
noor Well, thanks for letting me borrow you guys! plus glad to hear that i'm not the only one who wears glasses! :P Noor
Sep 2nd 2014
 
 
Munkashay OH I'M SO SO SORRY MARYAM!!!!! So sorry, but all electronic devices are banned on us so I don't check Vshine that often! I'm so sorry! BTW, Quotev is a website on which you can send quizzes, stories, polls, and can chat. Oh, and Noor, I am ready anytime for your Doujinshi...but I don't have glasses. Hope you will forgive me, Maryam! Munkashay
Aug 30th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Sorry Maryam, sorrrrrrrrrrryy!! Please don't say that, I'm really sorry, gomen'nasai Maryam-chan, we didn't reply to you because you said that you were just joking! But if you want 'I' will add you in 'my' story, but please don't be upset! Please? TT_TT. :( ;_; Shumaim
Aug 28th 2014
 
 
Maryam What is quotev???? by the way this my last comment to you because you didn't reply me. Maryam
Aug 27th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Http://www.quotev.com/groups/538002 Join up friends! Shumaim
Aug 26th 2014
 
 
Shumaim You are smart Shaheer. And Noor, sure you can borrow 'me' and I wear glasses too! So when are we getting started? Shumaim
Aug 26th 2014
 
 
Shaheer If computers banned on you use laptop :P Shaheer
Aug 25th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Thank you all so much!! Manahil, I'm sorry but I didn't time: computer is banned on us...but I'll send the next part now. Thanks again! Munkashay
Aug 24th 2014
 
 
Hadia Good:):):):):):):):):):) Hadia
Aug 24th 2014
 
 
Manahil Nice story &I wanna ask you postedthis story a month ago still no new stories Manahil
Aug 22nd 2014
 
 
zoha Amazing loved your story!!!!!!!!!! Zoha
Aug 18th 2014
 
 
Shaheer Cool. U real fan !!!! Shaheer
Aug 18th 2014
 
 
Alishba Ahemadani Amazing Alishba Ahemadani
Aug 17th 2014
 
 
Maryam You haven't replied me :(((( I can't show tears!!!!! Maryam
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
noor Hey,Munkashay! Love your story so much! :* but you forgot to add me!!! :'( know what???? reading your story gave me an idea to create a naruto doujinshi (if you're an otaku you HAVE to know what it means!) so for that i need to borrow you and your sis,can I? P.S. love you, your story, your sis.....Almost everything about you guys!!!. OH! and does anyone of you wear glasses or has at least 3 or 4 ear piercings(if you don't want to answer it's fine! :P)? Noor
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
Gul Noor Vshine will have no choice but to post it. Gul Noor
Aug 5th 2014
 
 
Irum I just loved it! You crazy Naruto fans!!;P Irum
Aug 5th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Hmmm....I think, but will Vshine post it? *Scary question* Munkashay
Aug 4th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Hmmm....I think, but will Vshine post it? *Scary question* Munkashay
Aug 4th 2014
 
 
Gul Noor Perhaps you could draw your own self and post it. We won't be wondering it anymore. Gul Noor
Aug 3rd 2014
 
 
Gul Noor Perhaps you could draw your own self and post it. We won't be wondering it anymore. Gul Noor
Aug 3rd 2014
 
 
Munkashay Amazingly, I wonder that too! Munkashay
Aug 2nd 2014
 
 
Gul Noor I wonder what you look like. He he.... Gul Noor
Jul 31st 2014
 
 
Munkashay We will be like we are now at first, then we go in the Naruto World and become Anime characters! Munkashay
Jul 28th 2014
 
 
Shumaim No, it's okay Gul Noor, I understand! Shumaim
Jul 28th 2014
 
 
Gul Noor I'll wait for Munny to answer. After all she's writing the story. And your 'maybe' is kinda.................. So, yes I'll wait for Munkashay. But don't mind, Shumaim. Gul Noor
Jul 27th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Wow, what a question! I guess we will be like we are right now...maybe! Shumaim
Jul 26th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Wow, what a question! I guess we will be like we are right now...maybe! Shumaim
Jul 26th 2014
 
 
Maryam First of all I have a complaint, you are exploring Naruto world ALONE!!!. where are the other Naruto fans??? (Including me). Just joking, continue the story the way it is okay! Secondly I like it so much. Maryam
Jul 25th 2014
 
 
Gul Noor No need to say it's wierd. I accept that but I ask because it's the first question to come to my mind after I read your story. Silly me. ;) :) =) 8-) Gul Noor
Jul 25th 2014
 
 
Gul Noor No need to say it's wierd. I accept that but I ask because it's the first question to come to my mind after I read your story. Silly me. ;) :) =) 8-) Gul Noor
Jul 25th 2014
 
 
Gul Noor I'm warning you its wierd. In your story, are you animated or the way you are now? Gul Noor
Jul 25th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Thank you, Gul Noor! Well, ask the question! Munkashay
Jul 24th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Yeah sure Gul Noor, what do you wanna ask? Shumaim
Jul 23rd 2014
 
 
Gul Noor Tick tock........ awsome, cool, sweet and (once again) AWSOME! ! But I have 1 question. May I ask? Gul Noor
Jul 23rd 2014
 
 

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