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Maryam Aamir
Maryam Aamir
Notorious Room (part 4)
Published On Jul 18th 2014
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I returned back to hostel. I tried to figure it out what was happening.  I couldn’t try it for long as I had loads of studies.
Exactly at 3:00 am Sarah knocked the door. I ran towards the door and opened it. I knew behind the door I would find Sarah and I was right. We had a little conversation which I started by inquiring her
“Where is my book?”
“I gave it for its photocopy.”
“I think you should buy a new one.”
“I wish I could, but I don’t have enough money.”
“What about the old one.”
“I took it to the park for preparation and lost it there. Can you lend me your jewellery for the party at my home?”
I felt that my decision making and thinking power jammed. I don’t had much jewellery as I took room for studies yet I had some earrings and few chains. I gave her those all. She took my precious jewellery and went with no bye.
  I sat on chair and realized, I did something wrong. Later I found myself in a storm of questions like if she cannot buy a new book then how can she arrange a party? Did she trick me again? Why I believed her again?
Somehow twinkling stars vanished and shinning sun appeared in clear sky.
I went to receptionist and asked her few questions out of my question storm!
 “Can you tell me more about my room?”
“What you want to ask me?” She replied me positively.
“Can you tell me exactly what happened to the people who stayed in ‘Notorious room’?”
“Look all I know is, everyone who stayed for month 30th day was their last and corpse was found lying on the bed.” She told me a summarized story.
“So what was reason of death?” another question from my question storm.
 “Extreme fear could be reason. People living in neighbour heard screams, so it is believed that the reason is extreme fear.”
 ‘Extreme fear’ of what?  Do they fear from a ghost or something else? I am not scared from any ghost like thing. I haven’t met a ghost yet! But her answer gave me a clue that what happened or happens not to fear from it.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Maryam Sorry i am late. :( i didn't read your message. My problem is same. I used too score 96% but I got 64% this time. My 10th result was also bad. what I did is i disabled YouTube because i kept on spending my time on YouTube. turn off all notifications of Facebook etc. then you will realise how long an actual day is? I hope this works for you as it did for me. :) Maryam
Jun 2nd 2016
 
 
Minahil Maryam i hope you will see this soon I have a problem whenever i try to study i cant. Once i used to score 98% marks and now im on 68% marks my finals will start on 4th March 2016 and still whenever i try to study im distracted i need help from all of my friends because it is widely said "A friend in need is a friend indeed" please reply soon i'll try to log on again on wednesday please help me im really upset i want to. Become the old Minahil who used to score 98% marks it is for the sake of my future I've chosen O'Levels but to go in it the pass percentage is 75% marks in 7th's finals help i will post this on all of my friends page please help thanks. Minahil
Feb 22nd 2016
 
 
Minahil Maryam i hope you will see this soon I have a problem whenever i try to study i cant. Once i used to score 98% marks and now im on 68% marks my finals will start on 4th March 2016 and still whenever i try to study im distracted i need help from all of my friends because it is widely said "A friend in need is a friend indeed" please reply soon i'll try to log on again on wednesday please help me im really upset i want to. Become the old Minahil who used to score 98% marks it is for the sake of my future I've chosen O'Levels but to go in it the pass percentage is 75% marks in 7th's finals help i will post this on all of my friends page please help thanks. Minahil
Feb 22nd 2016
 
 
Maryam I wish but I am not that good writer. Maryam
Sep 12th 2014
 
 
Mohammad Wow you r an awsome story writer. I bet you will be a writer Mohammad
Sep 7th 2014
 
 
Maryam First of all thanx!!!!! I don't remember the website. I searched by typing 'Pretty dolls'. If you are waiting for part 5 then wait till vshine publish it because I submitted it last night :D :o) and I am also waitiiiinnnggg!!!!! Maryam
Aug 26th 2014
 
 
shehram Maryum m waittinggggg fast plzzzzzzz Shehram
Aug 26th 2014
 
 
shehram Thnku!!! And so is yours where did u get it from i mean website? Shehram
Aug 25th 2014
 
 
Maryam Your picture is really INNOCENT :)))) Maryam
Aug 21st 2014
 
 
Maryam Okay I will. Maryam
Aug 21st 2014
 
 
shehram Maryam please post the story quickly i am waitingggg. Plz Plz Plz. Shehram
Aug 17th 2014
 
 
Shaheer Whens the next part coming? Shaheer
Aug 17th 2014
 
 
Maryam I'll send it soon and she told me because I asked her about my room. @BISMAH I was sad but now I'm happy again :)) how about you??? Maryam
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
Shaheer Funny, but amazing too. How can a receptionist publicize the hotel as it will get bad reviews cause of the "Extreme Fear". But still really cool not boring Shaheer
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
Bismah How are u maryam? Bismah
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
zoha Wow awesome story cant wait for the next part send it soon please Zoha
Aug 12th 2014
 
 
Maryam Yes! she is stranger but I gave her jewelry because of a reason which I would mention in either next part or in the last one. I just have to type it and send it. I'm slow in typing that's why I took too much time to write it. Maryam
Aug 5th 2014
 
 
Fatima This is an awesome story bt u publish the parts after SUCH a long time that I have 2 read all the parts again; So publish the next part soon plz Fatima
Aug 1st 2014
 
 
Gul Noor You were kind as to give the jewelry to a complete stranger. Gul Noor
Jul 31st 2014
 
 
Maryam Thank you dear but what you meant by kind????? And In Sha Allah I will send it soon. Maryam
Jul 19th 2014
 
 
Laibah Part 5 quick pls! Laibah
Jul 19th 2014
 
 
sofia Excellent story u were so kind in this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sofia
Jul 19th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Super nice story "YOU R CREATING SUSPENCE" Ayesha
Jul 18th 2014
 
 
Maryam You may have noticed the sentence ' I haven't met a ghost yet!' I use the sentence for meeting a ghost in room not anywhere else. Maryam
Jul 18th 2014
 
 

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