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Fatimah Latif
Fatimah Latif
Pakistan International School (pisj)
Lucifer (last Part)
Published On Jul 18th 2014
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I slapped myself on the cheek so hard that I could taste blood in my mouth. ‘Wake up; it’s just a stupid dream. WAKE UP…please wake up’. It was no use. I wanted to scream. I was so angry but couldn’t figure out at whom or what. I couldn’t feel my brain working anymore. I shut my eyes and sat on the floor with my head between my knees so as to calm myself down. I prayed and prayed until suddenly I felt the soft carpeted floor beneath me change.
I opened my eyes and was no longer where I was before. I was standing at the very middle of a junk yard. No…wait…not a junk yard. It was a yard full of bodies…human bodies blanketed in blood. Hands legs….faces….everywhere.
“Just a dream. Just a horrible nightmare” I kept reminding myself.
“Still think it’s a dream?”
“Katie!” I turned and saw her starring at me with red glowing eyes. I wanted to run towards her, to hug her, but something kept me rooted where I was-fear.
 “Like this place? You will soon join it” she said, with such a voice I had never heard before, checking me up and down hungrily.
“What…w…What-” I could feel my tongue weighting down.
“Look who’s speaking now” someone else said and right beside Katie a boy figure appeared out of thin air-Jake. Soon I was surrounded with people I knew weren’t real; Jessica, Carrie, Sam, Mr. Laree and even the little scout girl. Their hungry glowing eyes on me.
“You aren’t real. This is just a dream…just a dream” I started yelling at them. I couldn’t believe what I was saying; wasn’t I the one who wanted them to be real in the first place, yes, maybe but not like this…no! Never like this.
“You were chosen Becca. The Demon, Lucifer chose you. Remember what happened in the bathrooms?” Jake said with a crooked smile.
That night came zooming into my mind like a video. I shook my head. “This isn’t happening. This isn’t real”
“Snap out of it Becca. You know it’s real” snarled Jessica.
“But…” I wanted to ask them why? Why are they doing this? Who are they? But they seemed to have read my mind.
“We are the Devil worshippers. Lucifer is our master. We serve him” said Jake proudly.
“You were chosen because you saw our signs. You can see our real eyes, which are what gives us away to most humans. That’s why people disappear because we choose them, because they can see through our fake curtain. We couldn’t let you go, what if you found out what we were. That’s why you have to die. No one can live if they find out about us. No one, not even you” Katie said and each one of her word slashed me hard like a whip. I just couldn’t bring myself into believing this stuff.
“But…but I wasn’t they only one…there were others who saw you” I finally found my voice. Even though I knew this wasn’t real, there was some nasty feeling in the air…something about approaching death.
“Don’t you get it? No one saw us except you. There was only ‘you’ not Becca AND Katie nor anyone of us. All that time no one could see us, it’s what we are” replied Katie.
“This can’t be. YOU are supposed to be my friend…” I could say anymore, I just couldn’t.
For a minute I thought a twig of guilt passed her eyes but then she turned back to rage.
“Our friendship was nothing. NOTHING” she yelled “And you shall be sacrificed for the Devil”
They started holding hands. “Rise my master…RISE”. And they started muttering in foreign language.
“Please st…stop” I tried to tell them but they kept going.
Whatever they were muttering caused a stabbing pain in my chest like someone was trying to cut me in half with a saw. I fell to the ground with a tingling feeling around my legs. My blood drained from my body and this time it wasn’t from fear. I couldn’t move a muscle. I couldn’t even blink. Somewhere inside my head I heard myself screaming from pain. I felt myself taking huge breaths while the darkness covered like clouds before my eyes.
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Comments 42
Aliza  Aamir Omg i hate my self ...why i didnt read this awesomely awesome freaking story... MAN ....U R A PRO... *pulling out my hair* Aliza Aamir
Dec 2nd 2016
 
 
Aliza  Aamir Hey do u still use vshine cuz i didnt heard of u lately Aliza Aamir
Nov 30th 2016
 
 
Mehvish Wow so nice story excellent Mehvish
Jul 26th 2015
 
 
Shaheer Btw fatimah i cant find harry potter and PJ crossovers can u help? Shaheer
Jul 11th 2015
 
 
Shaheer So you do know PJ? Have you read the blood of olympus nd kane chronicles? Also the crossovers?? Shaheer
Jul 11th 2015
 
 
Fatima *chokes on pumpkin juice* It's YOU??? Lol what happened to your nose? That's how I came to the conclusion of u being voldymoldy's daughter. Have you stopped writing? Do you think you could draw percy and Annabeth? There aren't any decent pics of them anywhere. You have read heroes of olympus by now, haven't you ? *holds knife at neck* In which class are you now? I'll read the fanfics when I'm free. Fatima
Apr 6th 2015
 
 
fatimah Okay so heres a list of the best stories on quotev; 1) When Two Worlds Collide Book 1 ( Harry potter/ Percy jackson crossover) 2) Diary of a troubled soul. (not a Fanfic) 3) Bloodsport -Newt v.s Thomas- 4) The Pipers song ~ QUAT Peter Pan Fanfiction. 5) Holding On (Carl Grimes fanfic). 6) Demons ||Nico di angelo||. 7) Drown (Not a fanfic) 8) Cosmic love (Edmund Pevensie) 9) Fading Angel || Nico di Angelo|| 10) Time Turner (HP fanfic) caution; many of these contain mature context. p.s, ya i read ur comment on The mean Boy, well must i say "definitely Apolloish" *thumbs up* Fatimah
Apr 5th 2015
 
 
fatimah Well the profile pic isn't voldys' daughter, its me. SHOCKING right? i was actually doing a cosplay of 'jeff the killer' (creepypastas) . Fatimah
Apr 5th 2015
 
 
ayesha Good work Ayesha
Apr 5th 2015
 
 
ayesha Good work Ayesha
Apr 5th 2015
 
 
Fatima Oh, Fatima if you're feeling bored then just read the comments on the drawing "The Mean Boy" :D (How was my comment at it? Brilliantly explained,right? *feeling apollo-ish* ) Fatima
Apr 4th 2015
 
 
Fatima Funny you mentioned the wizard war since I just finished the second giant war :P and yes plz recommend some fanfics I am running out of them :( I did see your profile pic and loved it. Who is it, voldemort's daughter :P ??? Please draw more I'm a big fan of them. Fatima
Apr 4th 2015
 
 
fatimah Hey Fatima, did u notice my profile pic? Guess who it is. Fatimah
Apr 2nd 2015
 
 
fatimah Oh hey Fatima, ya I was kind of fighting the wizard war so I didn't have time :P. Or in other words I was busy on Quotev. AND no, I don't write fan fiction but I do LOVE to read them on quotev and wattpad. If u want any advise on reading some u can ask me. I will provide like a loooooonnnnnggggggg list of what to read. Fatimah
Apr 2nd 2015
 
 
Fatima Hey Fatima! Long time no see? I just saw your profile and am glad that there is another wizard demigod on Vshine :P Do you write fanfictions? Fatima
Apr 1st 2015
 
 
Khadijah And do you know Fizza Zaka in your school? I guess she is in 10th Khadijah
Feb 27th 2015
 
 
Khadijah Y♥ur st♥ries are just amazing. I have n♥ w♥rds t♥ tell y♥u h♥w much I l♥ve y♥ur st♥ries.......L♥ve them all♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Khadijah
Feb 27th 2015
 
 
Farishta If someone has seen 'black butler' Its an anime known as kurusithsuji Farishta
Dec 6th 2014
 
 
shehram Amazing story just love it plz do accept my request. :P Shehram
Aug 30th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Keeep it up. ayesha khadijah baji was asking that do u like fatima huda veryy much???;) Hafsa
Aug 24th 2014
 
 
zoha This story was amazing!!!!!!!!! Zoha
Aug 12th 2014
 
 
Arooba Fatimah your story is very nice would you like to tell me about your marks or percentage in the class ninth borad exam plz Arooba
Aug 6th 2014
 
 
Irum Aww, congratulations, Rumaisa. And, Fatimah, what happened to Becca's father?? I am DYING to know. Her poor father! He would've been so sad. First his wife dies, and then his daughter. Why, oh why, do you always leave your stories hanging halfway?? I loved it, though!:) Irum
Jul 29th 2014
 
 
Irum Aww, congratulations, Rumaisa. And, Fatimah, what happened to Becca's father?? I am DYING to know. Her poor father! He would've been so sad. First his wife dies, and then his daughter. Why, oh why, do you always leave your stories hanging halfway?? I loved it, though!:) Irum
Jul 29th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Congrats Rumaisa! And Fatimah, what does "There was you not Becca AND anyone of us"(-Katie)? Munkashay
Jul 28th 2014
 
 
Shumaim Congratulations Rumaisa for having a baby sister!! What did you name her? And guys, Becca isn't dead, because she is telling the story, if she's dead, how would she tell her story? so YEAH!! BECCA IS ALIVE! Shumaim
Jul 28th 2014
 
 
raveeha Fatima have you got an id on pottermore ????????? Raveeha
Jul 27th 2014
 
 
Irum God, I love how you end your horror stories with suspense and climax. I just loved it. You're gonna be a great writer someday. You go, girl! Irum
Jul 27th 2014
 
 
Fatima Such a horrible ending!!! Fatima
Jul 26th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα Amzazing, but thank Allah it didn't end as I thought it to!!And also for those who don't know I was blessed with a baby sister on the 8th of Ramadan....hehehhe i told this pretty late!! яυмαιsα
Jul 26th 2014
 
 
fatimah Kisses n hugs to each one of u......its because of U guys that this story finally completed .....i owe u alll....thankssssss soooooooooo much xoxox Fatimah
Jul 25th 2014
 
 
raveeha Amazing story loved it u should become a writer Raveeha
Jul 22nd 2014
 
 
Manahil AmAzing eNd!!:)))!!! Manahil
Jul 22nd 2014
 
 
Shumaim Amazing! The end of 'Lucifer' and poor Becca! Shumaim
Jul 21st 2014
 
 
Shumaim Amazing! The end of 'Lucifer' and poor Becca! Shumaim
Jul 21st 2014
 
 
Munkashay Ohhh... Demon, Devil, Lucifer, and people with red eyes...what will happen to Becca? But of course, it's the last part so keep suspense! Munkashay
Jul 20th 2014
 
 
kanza Nice story fatima but it made me sad Kanza
Jul 19th 2014
 
 
kanza Ohhh .... worst friend ever katie....* eyes full of tears * Kanza
Jul 19th 2014
 
 
Laibah Astagfirrulla! Fatima yeh part itna acha nahi that! tauba tauba! Laibah
Jul 19th 2014
 
 
Maryam What happened next. Becca become one of those or just died. Maryam
Jul 18th 2014
 
 
Gul Noor Ohhhh..... D..dead?? Gul Noor
Jul 18th 2014
 
 
areesha I am amazed how can you write such a long story its amazing Areesha
Jul 18th 2014
 
 

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