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Maryam Aamir
Maryam Aamir
Notorious Room (part 3)
Published On Jun 29th 2014
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My alarm clock woke me early morning. I was excited to find Sarah at my collage. As I was excited I decided to stay till the evening shift and also I wanted to know the reality of Sarah.
I got up and prepared myself. At breakfast I tried to divert my focus from incident happened last night. Half an hour later I took a cab and reached my destination. I was few minutes late so I on the spur of the moment ran toward my class.
In physics class I felt thirsty therefore I asked my teacher to give me permission for drinking water and filling my empty bottle. Since she was a kind teacher, she allowed me to search for water
I was walking alone down the stair case; I saw a shadow slightly beside me. It could be mine since I was the only one who was there. But no! There were two. I turned around to see whose shadow was that. Even though I was alone I saw a girl, her face was covered with her wet hairs. She appeared there like a spectre.
I stood still. I don’t have the courage to ask her anything. The only sound there was the sound of my heartbeat. Suddenly the spectre Started disappearing. Within a minute or two the spectre disappeared. As she the spectre disappeared, I regained my strength, run back to my class and borrowed some water from my friend Arlene. She was a smart, creamy colored girl with shinny golden hairs usually tied in a doughnut bun, wearing pink long skirt with blue shirt.
Incident at stair case doubled my thirst and convinced me not to stay there for Sarah.
To be continued...
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Comments 18
Maryam Thank you Maryam
Aug 21st 2014
 
 
Shaheer Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing story Shaheer
Aug 18th 2014
 
 
Maryam Thank you!!!! Maryam
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
Shaheer Its your own creativity. Coool. Shaheer
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
Maryam Thanx but you are so late. anyways you watch naruto on tv or net. If on net have you seen episode 220. Maryam
Jul 18th 2014
 
 
Munkashay I hope so! Munkashay
Jul 18th 2014
 
 
Maryam I made 6 parts, I have sent the 4th and it will be published in few days :))) Hope you will enjoy it ADVERTISEMENT:- Don't miss the truth behind Notorious room. Part 6 is coming soon. Maryam
Jul 16th 2014
 
 
Maryam Guess! for what I was Waiting, its you dear Maryam
Jul 15th 2014
 
 
Khadijah Finally the third part has come....the moment I was waiting for months... Khadijah
Jul 13th 2014
 
 
Maryam Thank you! Maryam
Jul 11th 2014
 
 
Hafsa I am amazed Hafsa
Jul 4th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Super amazing Ayesha
Jul 2nd 2014
 
 
Maryam That was my browser's mistake so inshallah I will send the forth part till next week and thank you so much for your comment. Finally I made it scary and I'm so happy. I thought it is not scary but as you said you was scared I changed my thought and next part is not scary. There is no such ghost in that one. Once again thank you so much. :))) Yahooooo! Maryam
Jul 2nd 2014
 
 
Tooba Amazing and i read this story at night 9:43 pm wow iwas very scared when wll the next part come i was waitng for 3 rd part from months and finally published it please publish the next part soon Tooba
Jul 1st 2014
 
 
Laibah Pls write part 4 too Laibah
Jul 1st 2014
 
 
Maryam Thanx dear. Maryam
Jul 1st 2014
 
 
Hafsa Wow!!! superb!! Hafsa
Jun 30th 2014
 
 
Hafsa Wow!!! superb!! Hafsa
Jun 30th 2014
 
 

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