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Shehram Chaudhry
Shehram Chaudhry
Lahore School Of Learning
The Clock Struck Twelve.
Published On Jun 27th 2014
Total Comments : 9
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The noise of the haunted laughter increased as the clock struck twelve. I was lying wrapped up in a blanket in my room. Since last week here were some peculiar happenings in my room. Suddenly there was a sound like that of a loud roar of thunder. My whole body shook with fear and anxiety.
 I tried to scream but no voice came. I was buried alive from fear. The lamp flickered twice and then went out. I was in complete darkness. I wanted to turn the light on but as my feet touched the floor a chill went down my back. There were sharp nails all around the floor.  My feet went into them. There was no way out.
No light and i couldn’t even reach to safety by going out of my room.
An idea entered my mind. i picked up my smartphone and sent a mms to my mother  telling about the situation. Still there was nothing that could be done to save me. The nails where everywhere.  I got an idea. A window was near my room and it opened out n the garden. I took a deep breath and prayed to god to help me. Then i plunged and tried to get hold of the window sill but to my horror my body fell on the nails and i lost consciousness.
I could feel the pain in my body. It was completely hurting and i was almost buried alive. Like a miracle i don’t know who perhaps the angel saved me and put me back on earth. To my amazement the nails vanished completely and i took i sigh of relief.
My body was covered with blood all over, and still there was more blood gushing out of my body. Soon my mother came to my rescue and then she called the doctor, while she aided me.
Lucy ended the story with this.  lol
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Comments 9
Irza AMAZING!!!! Irza
Nov 5th 2015
Kulsoom *GIGGLES IN THE END!* Loved it! Kulsoom
Jul 30th 2015
M. Please change your name...shahram pakikistani was may be keep ''shahram the great''....Isn't it cool!!!!!!!! M.
Sep 12th 2014
Shaheer Its fine "sherri". Shaheer
Aug 25th 2014
shehram Hows my dp shall i change it or its fine ??? Look forward to uour answers. Shehram
Aug 19th 2014
shehram Thank You!! Everyone . Shehram
Aug 17th 2014
Shaheer Good Job sis. Shaheer
Aug 17th 2014
Areesha Good story. A little bit horror Areesha
Aug 16th 2014
Marwa As I was reading it I had goosebumps !!!!! Marvelous Marwa
Jul 21st 2014

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