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Rida Rashid
Rida Rashid
E.m.s High School
My Toy Car
Published On Jun 28th 2014
Total Comments : 8
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Rank 9 Out of 10
My father bought me a toy car
it’s just like a 50rs chocolate bar
which can go very far
in the race it’s never last
i drive it with its remote
Its shaped like a boat
Please see its price tag
it’s with a Pakistan flag.
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Comments 8
Anonymous Rida Great Try! Keep It Up. I Like The Way It Rhymes! <3 Anonymous
Jan 8th 2015
 
 
suhaib Hahahaha!!!:P Suhaib
Sep 15th 2014
 
 
Rida Suhaib be careful next time. i can do this too with you. no need to get in girls. Rida
Sep 4th 2014
 
 
Rida Suhaib be careful next time. i can do this too with you. no need to get in girls. Rida
Sep 4th 2014
 
 
Sarah Good try! Sarah
Aug 13th 2014
 
 
suhaib Please use your brain ada.is poem cute enough to be called!!hmmmm.. Suhaib
Jul 20th 2014
 
 
ADA VERY CUTE RIDA Ada
Jul 14th 2014
 
 
Rida Please comment guys Rida
Jul 13th 2014
 
 

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