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Rida Zeeshan Siddiqui
Rida Zeeshan Siddiqui
Beaconhouse School System
The Snow Beast
Published On Jun 28th 2014
Total Comments : 9
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The big snow beast,
With very large feet.
Its webby paws,
and sharp jaws.
It’s a caring mother,
Like none other.
With its elegant white fur charm and grace,
it runs through the snow like its running in a race.
Its none other than the polar bear the big snow beast.
It’s always ready to have a feast.
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Comments 9
Rida Sohail and andleeb i am sorry that i said a few words that i think hurted u , actually i was angry at that moment. Sarah and Aden thanks for covering me up Rida
Nov 3rd 2014
 
 
Rida Sohail and andleeb i am sorry that i said a few words that i think hurted u , actually i was angry at that moment. Sarah and Aden thanks for covering me up Rida
Nov 3rd 2014
 
 
Rida Thanks for motivating me and the ones who said that its boring and confusing, I am sorry coz I was angry at that moment and said those things without thinking. Rida
Nov 3rd 2014
 
 
Aden Dont worry its a good poem Aden
Aug 22nd 2014
 
 
Sarah Rida has tryed her best. Sarah
Aug 13th 2014
 
 
Sarah Its not boring nor is it confusing. It a really nice poem. I like it a lot. Andleeb and Sohail you shouldn't post things to make people feel bad. Sarah
Aug 13th 2014
 
 
Rida What do you mean by "boring and confusing" and "VERY CONFUSING POEM" guys please post nice comments or if you do not like something do not post comments!!!!! and anyways if you concentrate on the words the poem will not seem confusing Rida
Aug 9th 2014
 
 
andleeb Boring and confusing Andleeb
Jul 16th 2014
 
 
ayesha VERY CONFUSING POEM. Ayesha
Jul 12th 2014
 
 

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