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Fatimah Latif
Fatimah Latif
Pakistan International School (pisj)
Lucifer (part 4)
Published On Jun 12th 2014
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“Don’t move honey” someone said.
“Where…where am I?” I heard myself ask.
“The infirmary of course” said Miss Hearts.
“How did…what happened?” I asked still drowsy.
“Oh, nothing to worry about, you just broke your arm and a ceiling lamp fell on you” she said so calmly as if this kind of thing happened so very often.
“Just?” I noticed.
“Well like I said nothing to worry about dear. Just lie down” she said sternly.
I tried to remember what really happened. I remember I was in the lunch room and there was Katie and… “Jake!” I said out loud.
“What?” asked Miss Hearts startled.
“It was Jake. I am sure it was him who…” I paused. I must be crazy at thinking he made the lamp fall onto me.
“What? Who is …”
But Miss Hearts question was interrupted by the opening of the door and to my greatest surprise it was my dad, staring at me wild eyed.
“Are you alright dear? Does it hurt? Oh so silly of me, of course it hurts…” and he went on blabbing like he usually did when he was so damn worried.
“Dad? What are YOU doing here?” I blurted out before I could stop myself for my father wasn’t so, what can I say; fatherly…I guess that’s the word. He seemed hurt by my response but all the same he was used to of it.
“Got a call from your principal about your…accident” he finished. I couldn’t help but see that he felt a bit ashamed of himself.
“I am so sorry honey about, well everything.” And I knew what he meant.
“No dad. I am perfectly fine” I lied. I didn’t want him to talk about mum and how it was his fault that she died Even though it was a disease that killed her.
There was a knock on the door.
“The principal wants to talk to me but don’t worry I will make it up to you” his weak smile showed nothing but grief as he went out.
 “Oh my...” Katie paused as if she wasn’t able to pronounce ‘God’ and then hurriedly continued saying “are you all right? That was so scary. I thought you were a goner”- as I entered our room.
“Fine I guess” I replied and sat on my bed “Tell me Katie, what exactly happened?”
“Well, I really don’t get it myself but as you were throwing that tray of yours the ceiling lamp just came down on you. I am just grateful that it wasn’t lit or you would be dead by now” she said.
“It was Jake” my tone so sure.
“What?” she gasped just like Miss Hearts.
“I know this sounds crazy but I just get the feeling it was him. I don’t know how he did that, maybe with that eyes of his but the thing is he broke my arm too so that proves it” I didn’t know where was all this coming from. Katie just stood there looking at me as if brain washed and her expression strangely reminded me of that little girl I met in the street.
“Um, Becca is your head alright? I think you need to take your medicines” she finally said.
“What do you mean by that?” my voice was suddenly harsh.
“Jake didn’t break your arm” she replied straight forwardly and this time I was the one in total shock.
“How can you? You were there and you saw it happen. How can you side with that freak?” I said angrily
“I am NOT siding with him; I’m just telling what I saw. You fell down, slipped on something I guess, and that’s when I noticed your arm broke because I heard a loud crunch” she said looking at me curiously. I couldn’t believe this, my best friend, lying on my face when she saw it all happened.
“I know what happened and you do too, you just want to hide behind a lie, fine have it your way then” I muttered and went out of the room.
I didn’t know where I was going until I realized I was in the girl’s restroom. Tears of disbelief and anger were streaming down my cheeks as I stood in front of the mirror. My head hurt so much that I grabbed a soap bar and threw it toward one of the cubic’s in agony. It hit the door and it creaked open. Thankfully no one was in here to see me go all crazy. I was about to leave when I heard a gargling sounds coming from the same cubical.
I went closer and knelt a bit to see what that sound was. Black liquid was bubbling and rising from the toilet seat. The smell was so disturbing that I almost fainted. What the hell was wrong with this toilet? I couldn’t take the smell or the overflowing black stuff anymore. I ran towards the door and pulled. It didn’t move. I pulled again, harder. It won’t even budge. Terror hit me so hard that my whole body started shivering. I had never felt this way in my whole life. My lungs where blocked and I could not even open my mouth to cry for help.
And then the lights went out. Everything went darker and colder. I could still hear the bubbling sound. I tried feeling the walls for the stupid switch but couldn’t fine it. I was never scared of the dark before then why now? Maybe because something was completely wrong. Maybe because of the feeling at the back of my head told me that I wasn’t alone. Like something was in here with me. A chill went down my spine and I shivered so bad for the cold was biting on me.
Then I heard footsteps, no not footsteps, they were too big and too heavy like something being dragged from the far corner of the bathrooms. “Oh God...please…please…what is happening?” I thought. I didn’t have the power to scream or to shut my eyes. Through the light coming from under the door I could almost make out the figure as it came nearer and nearer. One look at it and I fell but didn’t faint. All my senses were lost, like I was dead. And then it stopped, right an inch from me. Every molecule, every cell in my body had stopped. I was totally shut down but I could hear it breathing and then something extremely cold touched my cheek and that very moment the time seemed to return and every emotion burst out of me like lava and I screamed like I had never screamed before.
I half ran, half tripped towards the door and pulled with all my strength. “Let me out! Helpppppp” I screamed. I felt something slither around my legs and hands as I banged on the door. And suddenly a cold feeling spread over me like my soul had been dragged out and replaced by ice. And then I collapsed.
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Mohammad Nyc Mohammad
Sep 6th 2014
 
 
Laibah Buss, fatima, tum ne hamay buht dinou se suspense dil wayah hai. ab part 7 post kar bhi lo aur suhaib tum is ki NOT "bekaar" story peh comment bhi kyou karte ho? are you forced to do it? and btw, tum khud hi apne 5 ghante is par waste karte ho to iss mein hamari kya ghalti hai keh tum itne SLOW reader ho? Laibah
Jul 9th 2014
 
 
fatimah OMG! i love that song Maryam..... Fatimah
Jul 3rd 2014
 
 
Maryam Yeah yeah Becky g the monster remix. I'm a monster.... Maryam
Jun 30th 2014
 
 
Munkashay I think I said this before but SPOOOOOOKY! Munkashay
Jun 27th 2014
 
 
Munkashay Spoooooky! Munkashay
Jun 27th 2014
 
 
Munkashay I think I said this before but SPOOOOOOKY! Munkashay
Jun 27th 2014
 
 
Anusha Good story Anusha
Jun 27th 2014
 
 
Anusha Good story Anusha
Jun 27th 2014
 
 
Anusha Good story Anusha
Jun 27th 2014
 
 
kanza Fatima i want next part before i forget these first ones hurry up i dont wanna die before reading amazing story Kanza
Jun 26th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα FYI fatima dear, I have watched all of them*smirks* яυмαιsα
Jun 26th 2014
 
 
Gul Noor Thanx!! Gul Noor
Jun 26th 2014
 
 
Tooba Fatima i saw before sending you request that you have already end me so i accepted it and thank you for forgiving me you are a nice friend i should not had said those bad words to you in anger sorry Tooba
Jun 26th 2014
 
 
fatimah Welcome back Gul noor, i was starting to think all my friends were gone......and thanks allloooottttttt u Fatima, Manahil n everyone else........free hugs for everyone....... :D :) Fatimah
Jun 25th 2014
 
 
fatimah Yes Maryam, i have watched the percy jackson movies part 1 n 2, but to be honest, i totally disliked them....cuz they were totally different from the books....and i also read on wiki that they wont be making anymore percy jackson movies.....oh hey Rumaisa! i watched the epic rap battle n OMG! man they r funny but u should watch Justin bieber one....its soooo damn funny... Fatimah
Jun 25th 2014
 
 
Manahil AWeS0me!! Manahil
Jun 24th 2014
 
 
Fatima Ohmigosh!!! Your story is soo creative!!!! Fatima
Jun 22nd 2014
 
 
kanza Why havent they announced may winners? Kanza
Jun 22nd 2014
 
 
Irum Hermione is the bestt!! Irum
Jun 22nd 2014
 
 
Gul Noor Hi, every1! Back again. fatima, cool story. Love it. Gul Noor
Jun 22nd 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα *Blushes from the amazing compliment " Thank you dear~thats lovely of you and BTW Fatima....did you watch the epic rap battle yet??P.S the comma key in my keyboard broke so I will use ~ instead!! яυмαιsα
Jun 21st 2014
 
 
Maryam Hey Fatimah do you know about 'Percy Jackson' Movies. I am waiting for the movie of 'Percy Jackson The Battle Of Labyrinth' that's is my fav book. Maryam
Jun 21st 2014
 
 
fatimah Spoken like a true Witch, Rumaisa.......really am proud to know there is a Hermione among us. ;) :D Fatimah
Jun 21st 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα They are forbidden, but with desperate tines come desperate measures!!!*nods head like a wise owl* яυмαιsα
Jun 20th 2014
 
 
Irum But aren't crucio and Avada Kedavra forbidden?? Irum
Jun 20th 2014
 
 
Maryam I agree with Ayesha Lakho it could be a way to become popular. Maryam
Jun 19th 2014
 
 
fatimah Useful spell Rumaisa but i would first prefer crucio then slowly Avada Kadavra em.... Fatimah
Jun 19th 2014
 
 
fatimah Awwww....thanks u guys, i shall try to write it today.....thanks for those real encouraging words......love u alll...... Fatimah
Jun 19th 2014
 
 
kanza Fatima i love your story dont listen to these losers just continue i am waiting for the next part so hurry up Kanza
Jun 19th 2014
 
 
kanza Hey watch your tongue A.M abid if you are so talented then show us a better story you loser Kanza
Jun 19th 2014
 
 
Irum Of course you should continue. These newbies are new here and when they see people like us, who are here for years, they want attention and they think that the way to be popular is to fight with EACH and EVERY person... That's a totally wrong concept that they have. It's not true. And pleeease , continue 'Lucifer'. Don't cancel it. I know we all get lazy and don't publish the next parts of our stories, but I'm begging you, please continue it. (You said no buttering. See, I didn't butter you, but still I managed to give the message that PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR STORY!!) Irum
Jun 19th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα *uses "Repello Muggletum " on tooba and suhaib* яυмαιsα
Jun 19th 2014
 
 
Maryam I think you should continue the story ( who is saying ) as I like it and majority wants it. Maryam
Jun 18th 2014
 
 
Ghazal Firdous Fatimah, I'm waiting for your next part!!! It is as Awesome <33 as always! And You should continue as majority is waiting! Ghazal Firdous
Jun 18th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα And omg, just go watch epic rap battles-Sir Issac Newton vs Bill Nye......fatima fsst right now or ill never fogive yaaa яυмαιsα
Jun 18th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα Fatima listen to epic rap bttle- Edgar allan poe vs stephen king right now,p.s i dont have time for punctuation!! яυмαιsα
Jun 17th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα Well welll well, you have one more hater to deal with*dramatic music* яυмαιsα
Jun 17th 2014
 
 
fatimah Its not like i haven't written it , i just cant stand this website anymore, Tooba n Suhaib n now this new boy, so young and so foul mouthed...so please tell.... Fatimah
Jun 17th 2014
 
 
fatimah Hey guys, i really need ur opinion on this story, should i continue? do you like it? and be honest, no need to butter me k ;) :). Fatimah
Jun 17th 2014
 
 
fatimah What an impression new comer, what an impression...Ru looks like we got another one ;) Fatimah
Jun 17th 2014
 
 
abdul moiz abid Its not interesting its boring like the writer of this story.I don,t know why vshine have published this story on internet. Abdul Moiz Abid
Jun 17th 2014
 
 
fatimah Really love u guys for giving me courage whenever hope seems hard to find....thanks alll.... Fatimah
Jun 16th 2014
 
 
ajwa An OK story but i am waiting for the next part Ajwa
Jun 15th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα The suspense is great, just like you said. BUT there is one more thing that I m eagerly waiting for, and that is.......the comments by those filthy muggles.*Paces around my room* яυмαιsα
Jun 14th 2014
 
 
Khadijah Can't wait for the next part. Seriously it is the best of the best stories. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ ;) Khadijah
Jun 13th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Loved it! Ayesha
Jun 13th 2014
 
 
Maryam Nice story Maryam
Jun 12th 2014
 
 
Maryam Nice story Maryam
Jun 12th 2014
 
 

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