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Fardeen Ahmed Shaikh
Fardeen Ahmed Shaikh
Wilderness School
A Snake
Published On May 18th 2014
Total Comments : 18
Total Views :  963
11 People Like this!

May 2014

Rank 8 Out of 10
Cool breezes were passing by and it was 9’o clock at night. Extreme darkness surrounding me and I was alone in my home. Abruptly, somebody knocked the door loudly. That terribly frightened me and rose shakily on my feet. I was powerless and frantic with terror. But Somehow, I hesitantly went to open the door. It was really dark that I slipped on the floor. I was lying on the floor and a snake was watching my face. I was scared stiff when I saw the snake. I was that much brave that I could stand up and jumped over the terrible creature. And hastily I opened the door. Suddenly, the electricity lit up the lights and darkness ended. And I was glad to see my father standing outside; I went close to him in fright of snake. When I look back over the snake, it was a toy snake!!!!


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Comments 18
Fardeen Ahmed Thanks All Fardeen Ahmed
Aug 18th 2014
Ashra Congragulations Ashra
Jul 11th 2014
Anonymous Wow fardeen you won! amazing congratulations. Anonymous
Jul 10th 2014
Naima I am proud of youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! Naima
Jul 8th 2014
ADA Congratz !!!! i am also a winner Ada
Jul 7th 2014
Tooba And what do you by your comment its my choice what i write and what was he use to write cheater Tooba
Jun 16th 2014
Ghazal Firdous Tooba, I commented from Fardeen's account! And Of course, he is my brother! And what do you mean by your statement? Ghazal Firdous
Jun 12th 2014
Muhammad I will never forget this story ever nice one Muhammad
Jun 11th 2014
Tooba Ghazal and ur behaviour are same Tooba
Jun 11th 2014
TALHA Good One Bro. Talha
Jun 9th 2014
Khoula It was nice...making a sense..:) u used appropriate vocabolary.. glad to see a story like that..looking forward for another one..:) Khoula
Jun 8th 2014
Fardeen Ahmed Thanx guys! Fardeen Ahmed
Jun 1st 2014
Zaeem Cool Zaeem
Jun 1st 2014
Mahnoor Nice vocabulary+good story =) Mahnoor
May 27th 2014
Laibah Please wish me luck for my exam. first one is tomorrow on 23 may 2014. Laibah
May 22nd 2014
Farha I like the way u used vocabulary Farha
May 19th 2014
Ghazal Firdous A toy snake!!!! Very Creative + like a Joke :P Ghazal Firdous
May 19th 2014
Tooba Nice story fardeen Tooba
May 19th 2014

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