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Shiraz Larik
Shiraz Larik
Karachi Grammar School
Ahmed's Adventure
Published On May 13th 2014
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Once upon a time there was a boy named ahmed he loved to have adventures and he was interested in having adventures he reads adventurous books and listened stories of adventures by his parents one day he heard a news in a newspaper that valuable golden ring has been stolen he went to the park her friends were also there his friend asked him if he had heard the news of the stolen ring he told them that his uncle was a worker in the shop where the diamond had been stolen so they decided to go there when they went there ahmeds uncle took them to the place where the diamond was kept they all looked for clues around that place suddenly ahmed found a bag they all took it to ahmeds uncle in the bag there were weapons and gloves they all understood that the thief had left the bag it was afternoon so they went home next day they went to the shop and suddenly ahmed found a remote he clicked a button and a door opened ahmed and his friends went inside it and heard some people talking about the golden ring they went inside but someone saw them and locked in a cage they called for help but no one was around  they stood their whole day next day ahmed found a key he opened the cage and went outside they called police the thieves were caught the shopkeeper gave a medal to ahmed and his friend ahmed went home and told his parent his parents appreciated him a lot.
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Comments 9
Shaheer NICE Shaheer
Aug 18th 2014
Maikham Great!! Maikham
Jun 11th 2014
Huzaifa WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Huzaifa
Jun 5th 2014
Laibah Thx Akasha but FINNALLY my exams are over! YIPPEE!!!!!!!!!!! Laibah
Jun 5th 2014
Fatima Excellent!!!! I love it. Fatima
Jun 3rd 2014
Akasha Its a nice story Shiraz & Best of Luck for exams Dear Laibah :). May Allah bless u with success in ur exams. Akasha
May 28th 2014
Laibah Please wish me luck for my exam. first one is tomorrow on 23 may 2014. Laibah
May 22nd 2014
Anamta That is a really nice storyyyyyyyy Anamta
May 19th 2014
Tooba Nice Tooba
May 17th 2014

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