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Rida Rashid
Rida Rashid
E.m.s High School
Tim The Fox
Published On May 11th 2014
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Once a fox
Lived in a box
Ate a goose
And began to drink juice
He saw some berries
And some cherries
He was going to get its nectar out
But suddenly there came a water sprout
It sucked the fox up
And made him like a cup
The fox whined in pain
As it started to rain
Then a vet came
Linda was her name
She cured Tim
And gave a collar to him.
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Comments 10
kanza You write about my poem i draw very nice do u even know how to hold a pencil? just write poems and be happy Kanza
Jun 23rd 2014
 
 
Tooba Be quiet ada Tooba
Jun 22nd 2014
 
 
Rida YES! TOOBA MY SISTER IS SANDEELA. Rida
Jun 20th 2014
 
 
ADA TOOBA dont come between our conversation :p Ada
Jun 2nd 2014
 
 
Tooba Your sister is sandeela yes am i right? Tooba
Jun 1st 2014
 
 
ADA Rida plz add me ur sister is my friend .thank u Ada
May 31st 2014
 
 
Rida THANKYOU EVERY ONE! GOOD COMMENTS. THANKYOU ADA! Rida
May 22nd 2014
 
 
ADA Wow Ada
May 13th 2014
 
 
Rida Thanks tooba Rida
May 12th 2014
 
 
Tooba Nice poem with nice ryhmings Tooba
May 12th 2014
 
 

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