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Suhaib Siddiqui
Suhaib Siddiqui
Ems High School
A Memorable Bus Ride
Published On May 8th 2014
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When I was little I often saw my uncle visiting old strange places and searching for unseen treasures. Then I was so naïve to understand the purpose of his expeditions .One day I saw him very happy and delighted .I wanted to ask him the reason behind his happiness. He was preparing his luggage for another journey to some unknown place that I didn’t know. But before leaving he handed over an envelope to my father and told him some secret behind the closed doors of the study room. Many years had passed and I came to know that my uncle settled in Kenya and was doing some business there. Since that day he never returned.
Two weeks back I read an article in the newspaper that archaeologists have found some treasures in the hills of Ayubia. That gave me sudden jolt. I remembered the day when my uncle was leaving and he handed over an envelope to my father. I tried to overhear them and I could hear only two words,’’ Ayubia and Khazana’’. I was a little boy and I couldn’t follow that conversation but after reading the article those words reminded me of that incident. I quickly ran in to the study room carefully watching if no one is around and found the envelope hidden in the chest of drawers near the wall. I opened it hastily and my jaws were open wide with excitement .It carried a golden key and a detailed map of some treasure in the hills of Ayubia. I wondered why didn’t my father shared this with us .May be it was Amanah of my uncle but I was blinded by my greed and I quickly hid the envelope in my pocket.
The next day I shared this with my two most reliable friends. They were excited to go on the journey with me. Now we were waiting for some genuine excuse to go on the trip. We told our families that we were going on an excursion trip with our school. They trusted us.
We were travelling without our families on a bus for the first time. The conductor asked us for the tickets in a polite manner. The bus was clean .It was fully air conditioned and the driver drove the bus carefully. It was the month of November. The temperature was cool .The autumn breeze was playing gently with our hair which was so soothing. We took sandwiches and drinks with us too. When I was sleeping, somehow the key fell out of my pocket and got lost. When I woke up I made a chaos in the bus. Everyone started searching for the key in the bus. We asked the conductor to stop the bus. When we got out of the bus we looked in our bags, pockets and in hollow spaces. But alas the key had vanished in the thin air. We were in despair and shock. I was quite sad and didn’t feel good about the whole incident. I was feeling guilty and ashamed. I lied to my family, I didn’t take care of the secret key that actually belonged to my uncle and I shared my family secret to my friends without the consent of my father or mother. Though we reached Ayubia but we had nothing to do there besides eat, drink and enjoy the view. We came back to our homes in the evening. I decided to tell everything to my father no matter what the consequences. 
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Comments 35
suhaib Didnt you read previous comments @maryam? Our fight is over now..We did sorry .. Suhaib
Aug 28th 2014
 
 
MARYAM You all are using that kind of language that is burning your personality. you all should be ashamed of yourselves. do you want to follow Shaitan to Hell??? I say it with full pressure. you all are being ungrateful to Allah Almighty. that's what makes this Muslim Ummah weak. U ALL ARE DISSAPOINTING OUR PROPHET!!!!SHAME ON YOU ALL. WHY DO YOU ALL FIGHT ON SOME SILLY THING.I am sure you all say that we want to change the world and here you all are increasing the reason that destroys this world.this story was nice. But I hate it the way you are fighting. I am liking this story not because I am siding with Suhaib. You all are spoiling your beautiful names... Maryam
Aug 16th 2014
 
 
abdul moiz abid Hey what are you fighting for?Suhaib and laiba. Abdul Moiz Abid
Jul 16th 2014
 
 
abdul moiz abid Hey what are you fighting for?Suhaib and laiba. Abdul Moiz Abid
Jul 16th 2014
 
 
Laibah Suhaib pls shutup. Laibah
Jul 9th 2014
 
 
suhaib Keep your mouth closed dumb head!! Suhaib
Jun 25th 2014
 
 
suhaib Keep your mouth closed dumb head!! Suhaib
Jun 25th 2014
 
 
Hamza Waqas Nice one Hamza Waqas
Jun 23rd 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα Now my neighbours will think that someone escaped from an insane asylum...but whatever*-*I AM ALREADY INSANE яυмαιsα
Jun 21st 2014
 
 
fatimah OMGG! Rumaisa i laughed so hard i am pretty sure the whole neighbor is thinking there is a killer in our house...... Fatimah
Jun 21st 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα You know tooba dear, your comments, when they are read by someone else, they will think tgat you are one of those indian people who just like"you know you idiot boy i beat you and i complain ur mother how you not good at school you are very bad boy you calk your mother tommorow" *writes bad grammar, dies from shame* яυмαιsα
Jun 18th 2014
 
 
fatimah LOLOLOLOLOL.....i didn't get a single word, learn some English u filthy little cockroach ! Fatimah
Jun 18th 2014
 
 
Tooba Hey idiot fatima its none of your business no need to come between his comment idiot fatima ok idiot fatima this is only for you Tooba
Jun 18th 2014
 
 
fatimah U shoo dung head! Fatimah
Jun 17th 2014
 
 
suhaib Just KEEP YOUR MOUTH CLOSED FATIMAH!!!DONT need to INTER FARE IN ANY MATTER!!! Suhaib
Jun 17th 2014
 
 
fatimah No one is taking anyone's side u ugly little cockroach, who is wrong is wrong aka you......go eat dunk( if u know what that even means) lolllllll............... Fatimah
Jun 12th 2014
 
 
Tooba So my choice what i write stupid fatima and romaisa and yeah becauseyou both are rude and mean and in class 9 thats why u support each other Tooba
Jun 11th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα OMG!!What type of insult is gandi bachi, are you 1 yr old!! яυмαιsα
Jun 8th 2014
 
 
fatimah ************************ Fatimah
Jun 4th 2014
 
 
Tooba Chop ho joa fatima first take a new brain and repair your old one.and yah take your award of your stupid ugly appearance and close your mouth gandi bachi jo bohat jealous hoti hay.bad Tooba
Jun 3rd 2014
 
 
ADA FATIMAH UR EVERYTHING HERE IS TOTALLY PATHETIC SHAME ON U BAD GUY U R THE RUDEST AND THE WORST ARIJ AND ALEENA R THE BEST Ada
Jun 3rd 2014
 
 
fatimah U and ur bro just won an award......THE DUMBEST PEOPLE ON EARTH.......cograts..... Fatimah
Jun 2nd 2014
 
 
Tooba Fatima and saadia whats ur problem first look at ur stuff then say to others and you guys are being so much rude shame on you Tooba
Jun 1st 2014
 
 
Saadia Fatimah is right totally pathetic Saadia
May 31st 2014
 
 
suhaib And i also repeat BBOO Suhaib
May 21st 2014
 
 
zahra Nice Zahra
May 20th 2014
 
 
fatimah What r u, a two year old?. i totally feel shameful even to talk to u. i repeat "Pathetic" Fatimah
May 20th 2014
 
 
suhaib And your story the haunted island BBOOO Suhaib
May 20th 2014
 
 
fatimah Totally...what is the word, yes...totally pathetic. Fatimah
May 19th 2014
 
 
suhaib ANY THING CAN HAPPEN WITH A MATTER OF TIME!! Suhaib
May 15th 2014
 
 
suhaib ITS A STORY!!!!! Suhaib
May 15th 2014
 
 
raveeha How can someone go to Ayubia and come back so quickly???I am very confused Raveeha
May 14th 2014
 
 
suhaib Thanks all of you Suhaib
May 9th 2014
 
 
Arij Good Story!:))) Arij
May 9th 2014
 
 
Tooba Cool story Tooba
May 9th 2014
 
 

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