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Fatimah Latif
Fatimah Latif
Lucifer (part 3)
Published On Apr 24th 2014
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And so after the boring afternoon we went up to our room, exhausted. My mind was buzzing between detention and course work. I will just borrow some notes from Katie what’s the big deal?
“Don’t you have to go for detention?” Katie asked as I slumped on my bed.
“Don’t you have to go to your class?” I asked back.
“I AM going” she said as she reached the door.
I lay there thinking whether to go to the DC (Detention Class) or not. Maybe Mr. Martin won’t notice but what if I get double detained.
I instantly got up from my bed and headed towards my doom.
At dinner I asked Katie “Isn’t Mr. Laree being soft about the punishment?”
“Soft? You call cleaning the lunch room soft? You call two week detention soft?” She asked clearly astonished at me being mad or mental.
“I…Of course not but I punched HIS daughter, I broke her nose. I should have been expelled or at least he should have informed my father” I said confused.
“So you do want to get rid of this school, I see, well next time you see his daughter just push her off the roof of the building and your wish will be granted before you know it” she said.
“Hey, that’s not a bad idea; hmm…I think I should try it tomorrow. The sooner the better” I said smiling wickedly.
“Speaking of tomorrow, are you sure you aren’t coming to the Halloween dance? It will be fun” she asked pleadingly.
“Look I know you don’t want to go alone but its time you blend in…”
“Hey zombies who invited you for the Halloween dance? I heard zombie eat brains because they don’t have any themselves. Oh poor you! Must be hard”
I turned around to look who spoke and saw a bunch of kids laughing at the far corner of the lunch room and right in the middle was Jake Collin; laughing his head off while glaring with a red glow in his eyes at the same time. I don’t know how he heard us from so far but he got me so angry that I wanted to throw my lunch tray at him.
“Just ignore them. All they ever do is insult people” said Katie for my face had turned red and she knew trouble was approaching.
“I am not insulting you guys, oh no that would be rude I am just describing you” he said sarcastically as the lunch room roared with laughter.
That’s it. I got up from my table and was about to throw something at him when Katie launched herself between our two tables.
“Please Becca stop. Haven’t you had had enough?” She looked almost close to tears that I was shocked to see her like this.
“Don’t be a cry baby. You heard what he said” I said; anger rushing out of me like lava from a volcano. As I said it, someone from Jake’s table threw a spoonful of macaronis at Katie.
“Yuck! Who did that?” she said turning around; tears in her eyes.
I grabbed my milk pack and aimed it at Jake’s face. It hit perfectly. And so the food fight began. Katie was hiding under the table probably crying for she was covered in mustard and stuff you would not like to know but I stood my ground throwing food like a manic. Someone threw an apple at Jake, which he caught in midair and threw it at me.
“Ha. Missed me” I yelled as it flew over my head. Just then a lunch tray came flying towards me, I held my arm to protect myself and I heard a crunch. A burning feeling in my arm told me it had cracked. Anger and pain tears in my eyes, I looked up at Jake, who was smiling evilly at his perfect aim. How dare he? I thought I might burst with anger when I heard a distant scream, a brilliant light and an awful pain and everything blacked out.
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Comments 24
Maheen Interesting Maheen
Aug 4th 2017
Fatima So interating. Fatima api how do you draw so goos and how do you get such amazing ideas Fatima
Jun 9th 2017
Farishta Great story.It looks like you are much inspired from "harry potter" or should I say J K Rowling Farishta
Dec 6th 2014
shehram Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooool Shehram
Aug 20th 2014
fatimah To tell the truth Raveeha...nope, but as u say now i do remember it was mentioned....hmmm....mind like mine, i must be another J.K.Rowling ;) Lol :D Fatimah
Jun 16th 2014
raveeha U got the idea of red eyes from lord Voldermort from harry potter series Raveeha
Jun 15th 2014
fatimah Thanks Khadijah n Munkashay dears; and the answer to both the question s is no, no i don't live near the school, i live near the king Abdul Aziz university and i come by bus :). and no again for the Harry Potter book, i have only read the goblet of fire, half blood prince n the deathly hollows :D ;) although i love the Azkaban and order of phoenix movies, they r the best. however ma bro will be bringing all the rest parts which i haven't read.....just cant wait....:) :D Fatimah
Jun 12th 2014
Munkashay Wow, great! Umm,Fatima? Have you read Harry Potter And The Order of the Phoenix? Munkashay
Jun 11th 2014
Khadijah I can't help admiring your stories. BTW, where do you live. Is you house around PISJ?? I live infront of the school. Khadijah
Jun 5th 2014
fatimah Oh hahaha, u see i wasn't at school today, wasn't feeling well...... (^_^) Fatimah
Jun 4th 2014
kanza Salam fatima are u hiding cuz i cant see you Kanza
Jun 3rd 2014
fatimah Thanx a lot u guyss...n there is another part but once again vshine isn't responding...... Fatimah
Jun 2nd 2014
Tooba Lame Tooba
Jun 1st 2014
unaiza Wow! can't help marveling at your ideas Fatimah. Good job:) Unaiza
May 28th 2014
Manahil Is their a 4th part? Manahil
May 24th 2014
Asiya Yes, I remember you told me that your brother got the PJ series for you.I am the biggest fan of the PJ and Heroes of Olympus series. My favorite character is Nico:) Asiya
May 21st 2014
fatimah Thanks Manahil, i rly appreciate the way you think -_-. @Ayesha ya i read the PJ series but not the second last part, that labyrinth one, remember i said my bro bought 4 books, so i didnt read that one in detail however i do remember that bullies part( listened to it on YouTube) :) Fatimah
May 20th 2014
Zaynah Boring! Zaynah
May 20th 2014
Asiya Don't know why, but the part when Jake Collin 's eyes turn red, it made me think of the monsters which are in every school in the world of Percy Jackson(Remember Kelli in The Battle of the Labyrinth). Now whenever I hear about mean kids or teachers in any school, I immediately think that they're monsters from the Percy Jackson world and I'm a half-blood. You've read Percy Jackson right, Fatima?? And also the Heroes of Olympus series?? Asiya
May 14th 2014
kanza 10 A i will definitely come my classes wil start from 18 may i will come Kanza
May 10th 2014
fatimah Its 10A, seeing forward to meet u too. Fatimah
May 10th 2014
kanza Whats your class section fatimah? i would like to meet you Kanza
May 10th 2014
Manahil Nice one! Manahil
Apr 29th 2014
Ghazal Firdous Quite Lengthy! But Good One!! Ghazal Firdous
Apr 28th 2014

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