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Jack’s Adventure
Published On May 7th 2011
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Once upon a time in India lived a king who`s daughter was kidnapped by a witch. Nearby his castle lived a poor man named Jack. The king said that who rescue his daughter will get something in return. Jacks mom said him to rescue the king`s daughter but he refused. So his mother got angry and did not talk to him.
Then Jack decided to go to rescue the king`s daughter. He went on a fast running horse. He looked everywhere but he couldn’t find her. Then he heard a weird laugh from a nearby cave. He saw the king`s daughter and the witch. He went inside and tried to kill the witch but he couldn’t. The witch was about to kill him when Jack`s horse came and kicked swiftly on the witch’s head which killed the witch.
Then he went to meet the king. He married the king’s daughter which made him and his family rich and they lived happily ever after.
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Comments 11
usaidkhan Ure right the horse must have married the girl Usaidkhan
Sep 10th 2011
 
 
usaidkhan The horse should get married Usaidkhan
Sep 10th 2011
 
 
Bint waseem Gud!!! Bint Waseem
Sep 8th 2011
 
 
Mohammmad Good little writer you are BUDDY! Mohammmad
Aug 27th 2011
 
 
Zainab Hmmmm......its nice..... Zainab
Aug 24th 2011
 
 
Saniya The horse should have married the girl........... Just joking ;) Saniya
Aug 21st 2011
 
 
Maham Good Maham
Aug 17th 2011
 
 
Ahmed Mansoor Boooooring but nice try Ahmed Mansoor
Jun 13th 2011
 
 
magisha Boring Magisha
Jun 12th 2011
 
 
javeria Nice but..its not long and there is no adventure........i get a little bored but nice try.........try better next time.......... Javeria
May 16th 2011
 
 
fatima Boooring.................... Fatima
May 12th 2011
 
 

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