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Ghumaisa Usmani
Ghumaisa Usmani
Beacon House Okara
Old House
Published On Apr 17th 2014
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April 2014

Rank 9 Out of 10
Once a teenager named Aisha decided to visit the old house. She went inside the gate; she greeted the old man who was sitting on the bench. She greeted him and sat beside him he didn’t reply her and it seemed that he is in deep thoughts. But suddenly he picked Aisha’s arm and said’ please call my son’. Aisha questioned ‘why your son sent you here’? The old man replied ‘he couldn’t afford my costs’. Aisha almost boiling with anger ‘WHAT’ your cost. The old man crying said ‘we parents are the reason of his comfort right now, we worked hard and earned for him but now he is not loyal at all, we made sure that he gets all that the comfort of the world but now… tears ran through his eyes down his cheeks. The girl went to the reception and asked the reason of old man’s presence here. The receptionist replied that he couldn’t afford the living of his father. Aisha went to the man again and promised to find his son and get him here. She took address from the reception and visited his son the very next day. She told the situation of his dad to his son and told that he wants to meet him. The son said I don’t have time I have a meeting tomorrow. Aisha couldn’t believe her ears and she said “You don’t have time to visit your old dad, who gave you all comfort and brought you up, now you have money, job, and status, house, family everything but you don’t have your father with you. You should be ashamed of yourself. My job was to tell about your dad. I will tell him what you just said.” The next day Aisha went to the old house. She went to the receptionist and requested to let her talk to the old man but the receptionist replied that he has died a day ago. Aisha holds the wall preventing her from falling. Her tears were rolling down her face when she heard that, then she prayed for old man, and went home crying.
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Comments 20
Hamza Waqas Nice one Hamza Waqas
Sep 20th 2014
Ghumaisa Thanku all..... Allhamdulillah.. This all happened by the grace of that Almighty... :-) I got the stationery items and an appreciation letter... Thanku for those lovely comments and thanks to vshine team. :-) Ghumaisa
Aug 24th 2014
abdul moiz abid Good try. Abdul Moiz Abid
Jul 28th 2014
innocent Nice story Innocent
Jun 29th 2014
Zainab Cool story!! Zainab
Jun 25th 2014
abeera Very good idea and you do have a creative mind. Abeera
Jun 15th 2014
aiman Superb!! Aiman
Jun 8th 2014
Yawar Good Yawar
Jun 2nd 2014
Syed Abdullah Great story I think you got a girl's toy gift????? Syed Abdullah
May 25th 2014
hibba COOL wht gift did u get??? Hibba
May 23rd 2014
areeqa Excellent story and full of motivation too..! :) congooxx..! and what did u get as ur gift frm vshine..? Areeqa
May 18th 2014
Samia Nice and congrats Samia
May 16th 2014
nahla Nice...! Do Like This Types Of More Stories Nahla
May 15th 2014
aeman Very nice....i love your story ....very creative ....but...sad Aeman
May 14th 2014
afifah Superb, hey you really deserved to be a winner. Afifah
May 10th 2014
Ghazal Firdous Nice One :) Ghazal Firdous
May 8th 2014
Unicorny Very good story! But sad too!")))) Unicorny
May 5th 2014
Ashra Superb Ashra
May 4th 2014
 Shiza Very good!!! Shiza
May 3rd 2014
Tooba Cool Tooba
Apr 23rd 2014

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