I feel myself really felicitous For I live a pacific and planar vitality I am always rewarded when I have patience in affliction When I am legitimate with my work When I obey my parents When I indulge in clemency and charity When I help a poor When I pass a smile Because I am dignified of being a Muslim!
No! I don't agree with dua.
Vocabulary is a soul of poetry, and its not a job of laymen to use formal words with great sense!
good suha, but for next time... try adding rhymes in your poems to make it "sound" like a poetry too. :)