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Suha Mahar
Suha Mahar
Beacon Light Academy
I Feel Myself Dignified
Published On Apr 22nd 2014
Total Comments : 5
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Rank 9 Out of 10
I feel myself really felicitous
For I live a pacific and planar vitality
I am always rewarded when
I have patience in affliction
When I am legitimate with my work
When I obey my parents
When I indulge in clemency and charity
When I help a poor
When I pass a smile
I am dignified of being a Muslim!
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Comments 5
Suha Thank you all who appreciated me, and about the vocabulary i would recommend you people to increase yours inspite of telling me to use simple words :) And Maleeha ThanX for the Rhyming tip :) Suha
Jun 20th 2014
ADA I also agree with Maleeha Ada
Jun 1st 2014
maha Tooooooooooooo much difficult words Maha
May 1st 2014
Maleeha No! I don't agree with dua. Vocabulary is a soul of poetry, and its not a job of laymen to use formal words with great sense! good suha, but for next time... try adding rhymes in your poems to make it "sound" like a poetry too. :) Maleeha
Apr 25th 2014
abeera Good effort but using simple words would be more favourable Abeera
Apr 24th 2014

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