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Suhaib Siddiqui
Suhaib Siddiqui
Ems High School
My House
Published On Apr 10th 2014
Total Comments : 14
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I have built my house
Without sand without water
My mother’s heart forms a great wall
My father’s arms
The floor and the roof
My sister’s laughter
The doors and windows
My brother’s eyes
Light up the house
My home feels good
My home is sweet.
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Comments 14
Berha This is in oxford progessive english 6, i'm srry to say u hav copied it... Berha
Jun 2nd 2017
abeera Its good but cheated tooba im sorry but if suhaib does not have a problem with the comments then so shouldnt u we dont like cheated things so just let us be Abeera
Mar 17th 2015
Tooba Hahahaha fardeen ur first comment was gentle dream on and i think ghazal is ur sister Tooba
Jun 11th 2014
Fardeen Ahmed Excuse Me Ada, I just commented! Okay And I always stay in my limits. I said it straightforwardly, That it is taken from somewhere! And this is the truth! And...I said it gently. You should better control your emotions and use good language as possible! "Why you are shy or afraid in telling a truth?" More essentially, I have never copied anything from anybody and never will! I really HATE to copy! So, Never Dare to say that again! Fardeen Ahmed
Jun 9th 2014
fatimah ************************** Fatimah
Jun 4th 2014
Tooba Just be quiet you stupid fatima tumay kia masla ho raha hay.tumhay kon keh raha hay kay tumhay brain doctor ki zaroorat hay acha abb tum nay bola to may bhi boloon gi.tumhay to sharam ani chahya hay kay tumhay class nine may bhi hotay hoay larna nahi aata agar larna hay to khol kay laro my tumhara samna kar sakti hoon agar himat hay to lar kay dekhao.battameez Tooba
Jun 3rd 2014
fatimah Lol u guys (Cheaters) seriously need a doctor...a BRAIN doctor.........:D :) Fatimah
Jun 2nd 2014
Tooba Ada is right and she is my class fellow Tooba
May 20th 2014
ADA Ghazal u also be quiet now u and fardeen will write something and if i call u cheater u will feel bad so u should care of others if someone is not writing by own y r u giving comments its his or her problem and dont u dare say someone something apni oqat me rahoo chahay jitnay bhi mut se tum log baray ho me is mamlay me buhat strict hoon Ada
May 20th 2014
ADA Fardeen what do u mean by this tooba is my friend dont u dare to say her anything apni oqat me raho Ada
May 19th 2014
Ghazal Firdous Ummm I think tooba, fardeen is right because, we should create and make by ourselves to prove our skills and ability, Not to copy from somewhere and reckon it as we have written by himself. For instance, if you create something lovely in your mind and send it to V shine. After sometime, somebody copies your one and believe that he is written by him. So, won't you feel blue? Ghazal Firdous
May 9th 2014
Tooba Its not neccsary to make a thing from yourself and its not an exam fardeen.i am not fighting Tooba
Apr 15th 2014
Fardeen Ahmed CHEATER!!!! this poem is written by Annette M'baye d' Erneneville And translated by Veronique Tadjo Senegal -_- Create something By Yourself!! Fardeen Ahmed
Apr 11th 2014
Tooba Cool Tooba
Apr 11th 2014

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