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Mahrukh Kafeel
Mahrukh Kafeel
The Punjab School
The Stubborn
Published On Mar 31st 2014
Total Comments : 12
Total Views :  1483
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March 2014

Rank 8 Out of 10
Once upon a time there lived a boy Ahmar who was very stubborn. One day he went out with his parents for some shopping. On his way he saw a man who was selling some colourful chicks. The chicks were so cute that he decided to buy them. His parents tried to make him realize that it was a bad idea to buy chicks as they were likely to die soon. But, Ahmar started to cry. So, his parents purchased the chicks quite reluctantly. Ahmar was so happy to get the chicks. It so happened that chicks got ill and died in a couple of days. Ahmar was so sad. Now, he could realize that his parents were right.
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Comments 12
Aiza Good one Aiza
Apr 8th 2017
ayesha Congratz... :D Ayesha
Jun 25th 2014
mahrukh And my story is in VSHINE...................... Mahrukh
May 2nd 2014
Tooba Congrats and if you wrote this story very well and were the winner so you can improve your other stories also Tooba
Apr 29th 2014
maha CONGRATS!!!! Maha
Apr 26th 2014
princess Ur a my page winner congrats Princess
Apr 24th 2014
mahrukh Thank you for liking and commenting my story Mahrukh
Apr 19th 2014
Ajwa Wow Ajwa
Apr 18th 2014
ayesha A lesson story. very nice Ayesha
Apr 17th 2014
hadia Interesting :-) congrats Hadia
Apr 14th 2014
Ashra Good congragulations Ashra
Apr 5th 2014
Soha Nice! Soha
Apr 4th 2014

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