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Riko Tachibana
Riko Tachibana
Suna High School
Hide-and-shriek
Published On Apr 2nd 2014
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Back IN '75 a young couple, both 18, decided to get married right after high school. The father of the bride lived in Palm Beach in a mansion and was able to afford a big wedding for them. To make a long story short, they got married and the wedding was beautiful.
 After the wedding they had a big reception in an old building and everyone got pretty drunk. When there were only about 20 people left, the groom decided that they should play hide-and-seek. Everyone agreed and the groom was "it." They all went and hid and the game went on. After about 20 minutes everyone had been found except the bride. Everyone looked everywhere and tore the whole place apart looking for her. After a few hours the groom was furious, thinking the bride was playing a terrible trick. Eventually, everyone went home. A few weeks later the groom, having placed a missing persons report, gave up looking for her. Heartbroken, he tried to go on with his life.
Three years later a little old woman was cleaning the place up. She happened to be in the attic and saw an old trunk. She dusted it off, and, out of curiosity, opened it. She screamed at the top of her lungs, ran out of the building and called the police. Apparently, the bride had decided to hide in the trunk for the game of hide-and-seek. When she sat down, the lid fell, knocking her unconscious and locking her inside. She suffocated after a day or so. When the woman found her, she was rotting, her mouth in the shape of a scream.
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Comments 10
qurratul Good! Qurratul
Jul 25th 2014
 
 
 яυмαιsα Yes tooba she has a brother. яυмαιsα
Jun 18th 2014
 
 
Tooba Oh i felt so sorry for riko after her death so sad amy Allah make place for her in jannah ok does any one knows that is there any rikos siblings Tooba
Jun 17th 2014
 
 
Nabeela It's really scary. Nabeela
Apr 25th 2014
 
 
Nabeela It's really scary. Nabeela
Apr 25th 2014
 
 
Munkashay S-s-s-scary! Munkashay
Apr 5th 2014
 
 
Riko Thnx guys...sooo much..I mean like none of my friends appreciate creepy stuff. So i am like"okay...!(sad face-_-). And yeah @fatima, i made it up. not true man, i spend my nights in making creepy stories in my mind and then write em' down! Riko
Apr 4th 2014
 
 
Soha Good one :) Soha
Apr 4th 2014
 
 
raveeha I am never going to play hide-and-seek now Raveeha
Apr 4th 2014
 
 
fatimah Awesome , rly amazed like is it true? or did you make it up. but it scared the hell outa meh. Fatimah
Apr 3rd 2014
 
 

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