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Basim Mutaal
Basim Mutaal
The Lahore Alma
Funky Kid
Published On Mar 15th 2014
Total Comments : 7
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March 2014

Rank 9 Out of 10
Funky kid Funky kid Funky kid
Bad things were what he did
Everyone wanted to get rid of him
Except Kim
Who was his side kick
And both of them were very big
Funky kid had spiked hair
As long as a bear
He always wore a hat
Which had a picture of a bat
He loved eating burgers with Kim
And both of them wanted to do one thing
That was winning a trophy
For drinking the most coffee
He usually wore a dark coloured shirt
With a picture of a person getting hurt
Kim and Funky kid only wanted to win
From their biggest competitor Fin
Luckily they have won after years of hard work and pain
In the rain
Now that they have won
Their mission is complete.
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Comments 7
Basim If you liked my poem Funky Kid than you should read my other poems: 1.My Teacher 2.When My Sister Gets Angry 3.Austin Gloop Basim
May 3rd 2014
sarah Nice and one more thing try to add comma (,) after each line off your poem. It was a good try, keep it up :) Sarah
May 3rd 2014
 Shiza Nyc!!! and keep writing^_^ and CONGRATULATIONS!!! :D Shiza
Apr 23rd 2014
Basim Thank you Basim
Apr 20th 2014
afifah Congratulations! Afifah
Apr 19th 2014
Ajwa Woah...nice try Ajwa
Apr 18th 2014
mahrukh Good try!awesome! Mahrukh
Apr 8th 2014

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