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Syed Abdullah
Syed Abdullah
Pakarab Public School
Phoenix
Published On Mar 8th 2014
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March 2014
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Burning the forest
burning the sky
born from ash to burn the world.
With the speed of light
with the power of sun
it flies through the world
like a burning eagle.
There are rumours of it
but no one has seen
the great burning "Phoenix"
in the world so wide.
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Comments 9
fatimah Its not necessary to end each line with rhyming words , these rhyming poems r old fashioned now, am so impressed with this poem . rly amazing work Syed. Fatimah
May 10th 2014
 
 
sarah Nice but please try to end each line with the same sounding words. Sarah
May 3rd 2014
 
 
aleena Awesome keep it up i agree with all comments welldone Aleena
Apr 23rd 2014
 
 
Ajwa Good Ajwa
Apr 18th 2014
 
 
afifah Amazing! Afifah
Apr 17th 2014
 
 
hadia Nyc gud wldn :-) Hadia
Apr 14th 2014
 
 
hibba Nyc poem Hibba
Apr 12th 2014
 
 
mahrukh Well done! Mahrukh
Apr 8th 2014
 
 
sulaima This poem is awsome. Sulaima
Apr 4th 2014
 
 

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