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Anousha Khalid
Anousha Khalid
Karachi Public School
I Am Free
Published On Mar 5th 2014
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I am free
While I sit on a tree,
When I am free,
From all of my tensions,
Of neither any people nor any fashions.
I admit that it is the most golden time,
When i am making so good rhymes.
For the first time I began to love myself,
And the world seems so beautiful to me,
Now I realize that I am truly free.
I thank god for helping me,
And setting me free.
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Comments 7
Soha It was a good one:) Soha
Mar 29th 2014
 
 
Bassam Not bad Bassam
Mar 22nd 2014
 
 
Sarah It's a poem not a story! It should have been written in the poems section. Sarah
Mar 22nd 2014
 
 
Ebad Is ko to poem me hona chaheye tha. Ebad
Mar 22nd 2014
 
 
tehreem Good....... Tehreem
Mar 20th 2014
 
 
eisha Good...................................... but could have done more better by adding more rhymes good effort................................ keep it up........................ Eisha
Mar 12th 2014
 
 
Rihab Good but should have written in poems Rihab
Mar 6th 2014
 
 

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