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Manal Imran
Manal Imran
Published On May 3rd 2011
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Once upon a time, there was a girl name "Samara" who lived in K.S.A, Dammam. She used to study in Al-Majd International School. She had a nice friend and her name was "Sarah." And Samara was new to school and Sarah was old to school, since Samara came to school Sarah was jealous of Samara because she was good in studies, sports, manner wise, etc.
Once Sarah invited Samara at her house to stay, they both enjoyed a lot. The reason to bring Samara was "To kill her", after a long time Samara slept and Sarah woke up, brought the knife from kitchen and came slowly towards Samara. Suddenly,
Samara felt that someone is near to her so she opened her eyes and saw Sarah. Samara asked:"What are you doing? Why is there knife at your hand?"Sarah didn't replied and cut her body into 2 pieces. Later days Samara's mum asked Sarah:"Where is Samara??"Sarah replied:"I don't know and she went home at 10 am."Sarah told lie to Samara's mother. Later the Teacher asked the students "Does anyone knows, where Samara is? And why is she not coming?" Nobody replied.
Later at night Sarah was doing her homework she felt that someone is calling her name but no one was calling. After doing home work and eating Dinner Sarah was watching T.V and she saw Samara at T.V she suddenly switched off the T.V and walked towards her room suddenly she heard that someone switched on the T.V, she went to the lounge, she went to switch off suddenly Samara came out of the T.V and killed Sarah.
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Comments 22
Irum This is good creativity, but I seriously doubt that a girl in College wud do something THIS bad Just coz of jealousy. Sounds a bit far-fetched. Try writing what happens in real life. That would attract the reader to read more! And the ending was not clear, it shud have been a realistic ending, like Sarah owning up and admitting that she killed Samarah, something like that. Don't mind, please, just trying to improve ur story;) Irum
Jul 14th 2013
Manal ...:] Manal
Sep 9th 2012
Tooba I agree with yumna and emaan Tooba
Sep 7th 2012
Manal Lol..really Emaan! thanks but Kung fu Panda is the best movie :D Manal
Aug 31st 2012
Emaan Manal,I don't know what to say, BECAUSE THIS IS AWESOMER THAN THE KUNG FU PANDA! Emaan
Aug 14th 2012
Manal Thankyou! Manal
Dec 1st 2011
afia Manal your story is very nyc........... Afia
Nov 29th 2011
Manal Thanks for ur OPINIONS :-D Manal
Oct 13th 2011
Alyina I agree with yamna but it was nycc Alyina
Oct 10th 2011
Manal Aaaaaaawww,,, Thanks :) Manal
Sep 29th 2011
Zainab Love it******** Zainab
Sep 26th 2011
Manal Thanks ;D Manal
Sep 20th 2011
Bint waseem NYC! Bint Waseem
Sep 19th 2011
Manal Thankyou so much people ;) Manal
Aug 21st 2011
Bareera Wow! thats a nice story Bareera
Aug 16th 2011
yamna Manal,the story is nyc but sorry to say that you are too small for writing such violent killing and stuff.... Yamna
Jun 17th 2011
Momina WOW! Momina
Jun 12th 2011
javeria Yaaa...good story..... Javeria
May 17th 2011
Manal As well as Liza!! :) Manal
May 9th 2011
Manal Thanks Farial Pari!! Manal
May 7th 2011
Liza Its really good story keep it up Liza
May 7th 2011
Farial Pari Manal...! your picture is very cute..! story is excellent..! SAMARA & SARAH were good characters..! keep it up.! Farial Pari
May 3rd 2011

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