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Fatimah Latif
Fatimah Latif
Lucifer (part 1)
Published On Mar 5th 2014
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The boring spring morning smelt of sewage and fish. The streets were almost `empty for everyone was at work. I walked clumsily, my mind elsewhere. Thinking about my boring and adventure less life. I was about to turn a corner when someone called my name.
 Oh no!! I am dead meat-pie. How did they find out that I was bunking classes? But to my surprise it was a little girl wearing a girls scout uniform and selling cookies.
“Um, sorry if I surprised you but would you like to buy some cookies?” she asked with the cutest little smile.
“I …wait! How did you know my name?” I asked back. No one, believe me, no one cared about who I was and I was pretty sure I didn’t know this girl.
“I don’t, I just said ‘excuse me’ and then I asked if you want to buy some delicious cookies. They are homemade. I have got every flavor, there’s chocolate chip and..”
“Hold on a sec, I am definitely sure you said my name” I interrupted suspiciously. The girl looked at me like I just dropped down from outer space. Her eyes glowed red.
“I have to go. More deliverers to make” and she dashed away.
“Hey wait!” I yelled.
“Who you yelling at?” an old women yelled from a shop nearby.
“None of your business” I wanted to say to her but I managed to control my tongue. The girl was out of sight probably thinking I was nuts. Ugh, I seriously don’t understand the people of this town. First they call your name and then act like they don’t know you. Stupid town, stupid boarding school, stupid life.
See, I just arrived one month ago and was straight send to a boarding school filled with bullies more like a jail. If not having a mother to take care of the only child whose father is so into his work is called a crime, then that’s the right place for a person like me.
Yes, I am an only punk child of a rich man but I hate school and boarding school is way out of my reach that’s why I usually bunk.
I looked at my wrist watch and judging by the time it was almost lunch time. So I headed back towards the school building. Got inside without being caught, as usual and headed straight towards the cafeteria.
“Hey Bec, where have you been? So much has happened. I just got a new bully and guess what?” Katie babbled.
“Not with the bullies news again. C’mon Katie it’s only been like ten days and you have almost three bullies on your back and now one more” I said frustrated at my best, not alike, friend; Katie Jordan. See, she is like those nerd type and her glasses and the ponytail proves it. She arrived like ten days ago but the instant she did we became friends.
I have never had a best friend or even a friend but Katie is different, even though I bunk classes and wear all black and am quite lazy, she’s always there for me.
But as they say ‘With good friends comes great consequences’. Katie has made quite many bullies. And don’t ask me who, believe me you will find out. As she’s a bumbling person, I have to stick up for her therefore I also have to share her bullies.
“No listen Becca. This is epic. This new bully is not a girl it’s a boy; Jake Collin.” She said.
“The brat in my math class, the one who is worshipped by girls. Ookay, Katie I don’t know what you just said but I am pretty sure the world is about to end” I said.
We entered the cafeteria and sat at our lunch table the one at the corner also known as ‘the loser’s table’.
“No I am serious” she said.
“No way. I do not believe you. Why would a guy bully a girl?”
“Because I am an easy target” she replied with a matter-of-factly face.
“Look Kate. I will not always be there for you. You have got to stand up for yourself. By the way, may I ask, what on earth did you do to buy another bully” I asked.
“Well you know how clumsy I am. I just fell while coming down the stairs, rolled halfway then bumped my head hard on the wall right next to him” she said touching her forehead where it was bandaged. It looked so weird; I don’t know why I didn’t notice it before.
“That explains the weirdness” I said laughing.
“Hey not you too” she said half laughing herself.
“I see two empty-heads,
Ugly as rusty forks,
They can’t even be compared to the dead,
They are completely dorks”
“Here comes the devil. Remind me not to punch her” I said.
Jessica Abel and her two minions; Carrie and Sam are stupid useless cheerleaders also known as the bullies who bully us.
“You won’t, you know she’s the principal’s daughter” whispered Katie.
“That makes me feel much better” I groaned.
“Hey losers did you like my new song? It’s totally about you” said with her corky voice.
 “So your dumb head minions didn’t help you with it. That explains the rustiness in your voice” I said.
They glared at me as if they could burn me with their eyes and believe me for I moment I thought too for I saw a red glow in their eyes.
“You are a loser Becca and you are going to regret this” she said.
“Save it girl, you gonna lose your voice it you don’t” I laughed but Katie kicked me from under the table to shut me off.
“Oh look who’s talking. The freak from the motherless, ugly smelly hometown” she back fired and her minions laughed as if it were the best joke of the day.
I got up from my place and before Katie could stop me I punched Jessica right in the face.
“Call me motherless one more time and you won’t have any bones left” I yelled at her.
The whole cafeteria had its eyes on me and the next thing I knew I was in the principal’s office with a bloody nosed Jessica.
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Comments 76
Maheen Amazing Maheen
Aug 4th 2017
Fatima Amazing Fatima
Jun 6th 2017
Aliza  Dude you are an pro Aliza
Dec 2nd 2016
jasmine U all remind me of the squablers in enid blytons story peppermint rock.Anyway great story Fatimah Jasmine
Aug 7th 2015
Tooba Lol these kind of fights are SO amusing........that is unless you're in it. Well I'm glad you all have made up. Oh, and believe it or not it took me only 3 mins to read I guess having read stories like hermione granger for years does help ;) Tooba
Apr 17th 2015
HAFSA Plzzzzz include me in your friends;) i am ayeshas cousin. send me friend requests too Hafsa
Aug 24th 2014
amna Nice work :) Amna
Jul 18th 2014
Shumaim Well, I'm sure I saw it there....maybe because I was using Vshine from a mobile *shrug* surely 'was' there but when I checked it again, I used the computer and it wasn't there! Seriously, Vshine is a mystery! *sigh* Shumaim
Jul 14th 2014
fatimah But i didn't see it..... Fatimah
Jul 9th 2014
Shumaim Okay, I'll explain. Whenever you go into settings and select 'Picture', there are two options you get. One is " Upload a photo from your computer" and the second is "Choose a pre-defined avatar". Some avatars are already given by Vshine for us to select and your drawing is one of those avatars now! Shumaim
Jul 9th 2014
fatimah Pre-defined avatars??????? what does that mean? Fatimah
Jul 8th 2014
Shumaim Gomen'nasai Rumaisa-chan for not inviting you in this convo! Shumaim
Jul 8th 2014
Shumaim Well yeah, you are counted in my friends list Ayesha! Actually the best friends list, and Fatimah, do you know that your painting 'Dreams' is now one of the pre-defined avatars, it deserved it! Shumaim
Jul 8th 2014
 яυмαιsα Amigos!!!!Omg I have 3 best friend's Shumaim, Munkashay and Ayesha on the net...and yeah Fatima is my friend..irl*rolls eyes*, btw I am pretty mad, you all having a nice convo without me!!! яυмαιsα
Jul 8th 2014
Munkashay Yep,Ayesha, though I haven't got an iPhone to chat with you guys like her. >__< Munkashay
Jul 7th 2014
fatimah Ahhhhhh, i remember our secret language.... ;) Fatimah
Jul 6th 2014
Irum *gasps dramatically* Oh my gosh! You included ME in your friends?? WOW!! All I can say is, I am really honoured to be considered a friend among you guyss!!Love you all!!! Irum
Jul 6th 2014
Shumaim Mine has too, I *is* you even more! Shumaim
Jul 5th 2014
fatimah Thanks Ada (^_^)........@ Shumaim all i can say is "my love n respect for u has increased"...... Fatimah
Jul 5th 2014
ADA Fatimah it is an awsome story Ada
Jul 5th 2014
suhaib I don't care what ever you say to me. Suhaib
Jul 4th 2014
Shumaim OMG!! That's so nice of you Fatimah, but it is true, all my buddies are nice and awesome, you don't have to scream, you should be proud that 'YOU' are a great personality yourself and I should be thankful to you for letting me be your friend! All of you are so cool and amazing that sometimes I want to cry for being so lucky to have guys like you around! *eyes sparkling with tears* Shumaim
Jul 4th 2014
fatimah Thats the most sweetest thing any of my online friends could have said Shumaim, i screamed (out of happiness) when i read ur comment. Fatimah
Jul 2nd 2014
Shumaim LOL!! I'm so glad that 'my' friends are the right ones, Fatima, Ayesha and Rumaisa, my greatest buddies are always right, Masha Allah, and if someone talks about the story then let me conclude, it is AWESOME! P.S, don't judge the order of names I wrote. Shumaim
Jul 2nd 2014
Laibah Ayesha, rumaisa, u r right. for eg tooba just cant stop fighting. and then theres suhaib who cant shutup. i wonder that how could vshine approve their comments Laibah
Jul 1st 2014
Laibah Tooba tum hamesha ghalat side kyou leti ho? it took me 5 mins to read too but no one can read a story of about that long for more than 15 mins, unless you're lazy. suhaib itne bure comments likhta hai aur tum usi ki side leh leti ho. kya wo tumhara bhai hai jiski tum itni fikr karti ho? Laibah
Jul 1st 2014
 яυмαιsα I totally agree with you Ayesha, first it was that Amn guy, and now these new "weirdos". яυмαιsα
Jun 27th 2014
Irum Okay, I think that VShine is overrun with a new generation of kids. They seriously have no idea WHAT freaking thing they're typing and just do it. VShine has become a really really weird place..We have an infestation of weirdos. And I do NOT know what to do with them.. Any suggestions?? Irum
Jun 25th 2014
ADA But dont say that again its a bad word Ada
Jun 25th 2014
suhaib Lord of the rings??? Suhaib
Jun 25th 2014
 яυмαιsα Tooba the most imporatant thing is that what Suhaib said and what ada said!! яυмαιsα
Jun 23rd 2014
Tooba Be quiet ada and suhaib can do mistake and he ha s more knowledge than you and dont try to be smart Tooba
Jun 22nd 2014
Irum What the....??? How could VShine post stuff like this? Weird. Irum
Jun 22nd 2014
 яυмαιsα P.s your DP just goes soo awesomely with that that the hell...muggles ~_~ яυмαιsα
Jun 21st 2014
 яυмαιsα Omg made me chuckle but fatima that "What the hell" made me cackle like a witch!!LOLOLOLOLLOL яυмαιsα
Jun 21st 2014
fatimah What the helll?????? Fatimah
Jun 21st 2014
ADA Suhaib its not poignant its pregnant Ada
Jun 21st 2014
Irum Exactly, my friend, exactly!! Irum
Jun 20th 2014
fatimah Hahhaha good one Ayesha....these aliens r the reason our people r coming to an extinct..... Fatimah
Jun 19th 2014
Irum So what Suhaib is saying is that Tooba is in a pitiful state. At least that's true! She is poignant, that little muggle... Irum
Jun 19th 2014
Irum Guys, I had to look up 'poignant' on Google, and I got this--''poignant:evoking a keen sense of sadness or regret.'' Synonyms are: touching, moving, sad, saddening, affecting, pitiful, piteous, pitiable, pathetic, sorrowful, mournful, tearful, wretched, miserable, bitter, painful, distressing, disturbing, heart-rending, heartbreaking, tear-jerking, plaintive, upsetting, tragic Irum
Jun 19th 2014
 яυмαιsα This is the reason fatima, I did not call these muggles a mud blood!! яυмαιsα
Jun 18th 2014
fatimah Dont rly know if its a real word Ru, in fact i don't rly know if Suhaib is real either, for i have never seen anyone so dumber than a dumb.... Fatimah
Jun 18th 2014
fatimah Yep we gotta respect Hermione for she was proud to be a mudblood...and thanks you guys for coming to ma aid.... Fatimah
Jun 18th 2014
Irum Again with the punctuating!!! Atleast put a full-stop, darling Tooba!! Oh, and Fatimah, right, I get it now.Cockroach is better because Mudblood would be offensive to Hermione, I think, because Draco called her that.. Irum
Jun 18th 2014
 яυмαιsα Is poignant a new muggle word Fatima, do you know about it??? And yeah suhaib, I dont know what that means you mortal!!p.s they say mortals to human beings in LOTR(LORD OF THE RINGS) яυмαιsα
Jun 17th 2014
 яυмαιsα They are not mud bloods, they are muggles, "pathetic" like Dudley^^ яυмαιsα
Jun 17th 2014
fatimah Wow Tooba, u know what u remind me of....those dunderhead mental freaks with freckles on their faces and huge slugs as their eyebrows.....yep thats right shuck faced freak....u r one of em. u n ur dung head bro.... Fatimah
Jun 17th 2014
fatimah OMG! u dung head Suhaib....shoo shooo doggy Fatimah
Jun 17th 2014
suhaib But if u know the meaning of it:P Suhaib
Jun 17th 2014
Jun 17th 2014
fatimah Oh i tried to make it sound like when Hermione was about to hit Malfoy, isnt that what she said? "Filthy little Cockroach" and then boom...she punched Malfoy... Fatimah
Jun 16th 2014
Jun 16th 2014
Irum Correction*You filthy little mudblood* @Fatimah: You could have called Tooba(the master of punctuating) a mudblood. That would have been satisfying.. Oh, btw, how'd Riko die??Not trying to poke my nose in other people's business, just asking?? Irum
Jun 16th 2014
fatimah SHUT UP TOOBA, JUST SHUT THE HELL UP. Rico passed away n dont u even dare to open that filthy mouth of urs, no one is interested in u, u filthy little cockroach..... Fatimah
Jun 12th 2014
Tooba Romaisa not important to read in 5 or 6 mins and by the way dont guess okay who will read the story and cont the mins.and fatima no need to be funny you know all the thing that romaisa is joking Tooba
Jun 11th 2014
fatimah Whatattatatatatta?????????? Riko passed away...... how? when? y didn't no one told me? Fatimah
Jun 6th 2014
 яυмαιsα OMG!!I can't stop laughing at Tooba's insult, so pathetic. Tooba dear, first you have to learn how to insult someone.XDXDXD, my stomach is hurting...OWWXDXDXDXDXD яυмαιsα
Jun 6th 2014
 яυмαιsα Lol Fatima, you got some haters to bother you!! And Tooba, it took max 6 min for me to read it, like seriously don't you read books, and don't you freaking insult Riko, you must know that she passed away!! яυмαιsα
Jun 6th 2014
Tooba Bus bohat hoa bohat bardash kar lia apni chonch band rakho fatima stupid.hahaha fatima is stupid ugly selfish mean cruel rude hahaha silly fatima huh battameez Tooba
Jun 3rd 2014
fatimah Talk to the hand gurlll.......... Fatimah
Jun 2nd 2014
Tooba Riko it took 5 mins for you to read but others it can take more than 5 dont try to be over smart and suhaib told just the exact of the time and i sure agree with suhaib a boring and pathetic story fatima shame on you Tooba
Jun 1st 2014
unaiza Seems a splendid story:) Unaiza
May 28th 2014
Unicorny Brilliant story! And Suhaib, it's not pathetic! Just ignore him Fatimah!:)))) Unicorny
May 18th 2014
Riko Lol WELCX. It is my pleasure ur highness. Oh god i m trying to post a story and like it's been 6 weeks since i m like trying and trying!!! Riko
Mar 30th 2014
Riko Minions are people that you know help someone greater....lik if i controlled vshine and ur minds...u all would be my minions!!!!And no...the bullies are not aliens...LOL Riko
Mar 27th 2014
fatimah Amn, minions means servants or workers, just look up the meaning in a dictionary. and yep there are about 7 parts left. i know there are many questions unexplained but you will get them in the end of the story, all you need is patience :). let me tell you guys that its not a "drama" or "bully" story its a horror one, you can understand that from the name "Lucifer" which means Satan or devil. i know its doesn't sounds scary but hey i always leave the best part in the end .:D BTW thanx alot Riko for standing up for meh :) :D. Fatimah
Mar 27th 2014
KHAN Well um a good story but minions?Was that school of small,two-eyed monsters and I really don't get the point if the story.Where the bullies aliens?Is there going to be anther part by the way?There are so many questions unexplained in this story. Khan
Mar 27th 2014
Riko And how much of a slow reader are u suhaib? This story took me 5min to read. Riko
Mar 25th 2014
Riko Why is it pathetic @suhaib!!Oh and fatima, awsum story!! Riko
Mar 25th 2014
fatimah U did ma dear...... Fatimah
Mar 22nd 2014
suhaib Who will spend 25 minutes on reading this pathetic story!!! Suhaib
Mar 22nd 2014
Muhammad Enfriar! That's Spanish for "Cool". Muhammad
Mar 17th 2014
Mahnoor Nice one! Mahnoor
Mar 10th 2014
Manahil Waiting for the next part Manahil
Mar 6th 2014
Manahil Waiting for the next part Manahil
Mar 6th 2014

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