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Rohma Khan
Rohma Khan
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The Horrifying Nightmare
Published On Mar 5th 2014
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It was a cold and dark night of December. We are spending our vacations at the resort .my sister heard someone’s foot step’s voice. That time my mom was sleeping and my father was reading book. Me and my sister came out side of resort to see who is there?? But suddenly I heard the voice of cackle when we took step forward! There was a tree roots which starting coming outside like snake!!! We start running & we ran about half an hour. My sister had pain in her leg we sit on near bench for rest and we fall asleep there. . when I open my eyes  1 I found myself at my bed I said “ OH HASHH! IT WAS DREAM THANKS GOD “then I went towards stair to see my sister. WHAT DID I SAW??? OH MY GOD!!!!  There was a fountain of ugly green liquid and the head of spider swing from the roof of room. That time I will go crazy I just want to see my sister. I saw outside from room’s window I saw my sister! She was fainted there were from we ran last night! After this I try to awake her but she didn’t giving any response to me! I saw man who were going straight towards the strange castle I follow him & I saw a weird room in castle it was totally black. I enter that room & I closed my eyes & when I open my eyes……… I found self with my sister in my room with my parents in resort! I said “WHAT?? I SAW A DREAM IN DREAM!!!!!! A NIGHTMARE IN NIGHTMARE!!!!!!!! After all that when I came out for walk in morning when I saw there was a tree but not roots! There was old church but not that castle
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zahaab Manahil its very very bad!!!!! hehehe Zahaab
May 1st 2014
 
 
Tooba A little bit mistakes but otherwise nice and keep it up Tooba
Apr 17th 2014
 
 
Tooba A little bit mistakes but otherwise nice and keep it up Tooba
Apr 17th 2014
 
 
qurratul Manahil, we don't have to say someone's practice bad.it's a practice.so we have to improve it's mistake. Appriciate him/her.he/she will not make mistake next time!!! INSHALLAH!!!! Qurratul
Apr 12th 2014
 
 
Soha Woah! There were some mistakes but it was a god try and a horrifying one :P Soha
Mar 29th 2014
 
 
manahil What a lame story Manahil
Mar 26th 2014
 
 
qurratul B-o,GOOD! Qurratul
Mar 22nd 2014
 
 
qurratul B-o,GOOD! Qurratul
Mar 22nd 2014
 
 
qurratul B-o,GOOD! Qurratul
Mar 22nd 2014
 
 
Anusha Some mistakes by the way nice Anusha
Mar 15th 2014
 
 
Anusha Some mistakes by the way nice Anusha
Mar 15th 2014
 
 
KHAN Gr8 Khan
Mar 14th 2014
 
 

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