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Fariba Ahmed
Fariba Ahmed
Bangladesh International School Jeddah
The Evil Fairy Queen
Published On Feb 28th 2014
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Once upon a time there was a girl called pam. One day while she was reading a book, she heard a loud crash that came from the garden. She went outside and saw what it was. It was a time machine."Let me go to the future and see what's happening" she said to herself. She opened the door and stepped inside. There were many buttons. She pressed a green one and it took her to the future. She was in a forest. The forest was very beautiful. The birds were chirping and there were a lot of flowers."I'll stay here a little longer" she thought and fell asleep beside a tree. When she woke up, all the birds had stopped chirping and there were no flowers to be seen anywhere. She heard someone crying. It was a fairy."What's  wrong?"Pam asked."The evil fairy queen kidnapped all my friends." said the fairy."I'll help you rescue them" said Pam. The fairy took her to the evil fairy queen's castle. It was a very big castle and there was a river full of blood beside it. The evil fairy queen appeared and said "WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT DO YOU WANT?!!. I am Pam and I came to rescue the fairies." she said. Pam grabbed the evil fairies wand and stepped on it."NOOOOOO!!" The evil fairy shouted and then she disappeared. Pam rescued the fairies and took them to the forest."Thank you. You saved us." said the queen of fairies."Do you want to have dinner with us?" the fairies asked."I wish I could but I have to go back." said Pam. She went back to the past and went home."Where were you Pam?" her mother asked. Pam told her all about her adventure and the fairies, then she took her to the garden to show her the time machine, but it wasn't there anymore.
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Comments 6
Tooba Nice Tooba
Apr 23rd 2014
 
 
qurratul You've end the story very fast.You may add some magic e.t.c...In the start the story was very nice.Hope that you will check that and don't make these types of mistakes. but........ GOOD JOB !!! Qurratul
Mar 31st 2014
 
 
qurratul You've end the story very fast.You may add some magic e.t.c...In the start the story was very nice.Hope that you will check that and don't make these types of mistakes. but........ GOOD JOB !!! Qurratul
Mar 31st 2014
 
 
Laibah Its a very good story but some mistakes Laibah
Mar 1st 2014
 
 
HAFSA In the first line Pam should be with capital letters overall a very nice story mashALLAH. Hafsa
Mar 1st 2014
 
 
Fariba Sorry i made a mistake in this sentence."Pam grabbed the evil fairy's wand." Fariba
Mar 1st 2014
 
 

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