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Maazazafar Qasmi
Maazazafar Qasmi
Happy Palace Grammar School , Karachi
Fairy Tale
Published On Apr 24th 2011
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April 2011
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Once upon a time there were so many beautiful houses in one area. Rajput House, Raj Mahal, Mini House, Witch House and Home Sweet Home were the famous houses. In Raj Mahal there was a cute girl, her name was Alisha, and she had a Mother, Father, Grandfather and an elder brother Ali. All the members of the house love her a lot even all the people who live on that area liked her from the heart. All the children of the famous houses were the friends of Alisha.
Once Alisha was playing in the garden of the witch's house, the Witch called her and said: Oh, my dear girl, please favour me. Then Alisha said that: Yes of course, Why not. What I have to do Witch? Witch said: You have to wash my clothes because today I am not feeling well. Alisha went to do the work; while she was working she wished that if I would have a Fairy I can do any thing.
After 3 hours she was standing in the center of the garden she saw a beautiful Fairy standing in front of her. She was so surprised to see the Fairy. She took the Fairy to her house and she was very happy. She told everyone about that, her mother was also very happy. Ali gave the Fairy a name also that was, Finni Fairy. The Fairy lived with the people of that area very happily. After 2 years when Alisha was 7 years old, Finni Fairy called Alisha to her room and holds her hand and said that:"My dear baby, I love you a lot that is why I came here for you but now this the time to go. Alisha now my people are calling me back and I have to go. Alisha replied:"No, I will not allow you to go .Now you are the part of my Family and I can not leave any member of my family. Finni said: “Alisha, try to understand. I know you love me but my own people also love me. And I promise you I will come soon. Take care.”
“No, I can not let you go, wait… wait.....please wait Finni Fairy wait for me .Please do not go. All the friends and family members of Alisha were also very sad and they were trying to make her happy. After few months Alisha forget the fairy and lived happily with all the people near her house.
 
 
 
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Aimen Gr8 story Aimen
Apr 15th 2013
 
 
Ahmed I won last year in july! and didnt got my prize.when the hell i will recieve my prize!and pls dont tell me about my address isn,t complete.pls!for vshine ministor Ahmed
Aug 3rd 2011
 
 
Ahmed Nyc story dude Ahmed
Aug 3rd 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx Yrr but this pic lujs nice only bcz of my little sis....n this pic is also of last year.n my aim is to b a dentist..n haneea i will also comment on urs poem Maazazafar
Jul 15th 2011
 
 
Aisha I am really sorry, I can not upload my picture because all my pictures are in laptop whereas now i am using computer, that's why I can't upload it. You look really nice in this pic. Aisha
Jul 14th 2011
 
 
Itachi Maaza i m 11 years old but this picture is when i was 7 or 8 n i m sorry that i don't have my recent pic. Itachi
Jul 14th 2011
 
 
Itachi Maaza u look cute too!!! srry i told u the wrong page and i didn't tell u it's title .n i m sooo srry.It is a poem n the title is Wind.it is on page 26 or 27 Itachi
Jul 14th 2011
 
 
Aisha What is your aim Maaza and when is your birthday Aisha
Jul 14th 2011
 
 
Aisha My aim is to be a good Muslim, a sincere Pakistani , a good citizen and to serve Pakistan in a better way. Aisha
Jul 14th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Ok Haneea I will... Maazazafar
Jul 14th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Haneea I saw ur pic itss Ausome u are so cute n how old r u? Maazazafar
Jul 14th 2011
 
 
Itachi Maaza please comment on my poem wind it maybe on 11th or 12th page. i will let u know in a min Itachi
Jul 14th 2011
 
 
Itachi Maaza actullay my recent picture is in burqa and the one without scarf is the pic of 2008.I will see if i have any recent pic so i will put it. Itachi
Jul 14th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Hi Guyzz.I mean Aisha n Haneea....m fine but so worried bcz....well leave it all soon I will go to a FARM HOUSE PICNIC....ya i know Aish a about ur sis i have added her in my screen..n I WANNA B A DENTIST bcz dentists are very high through financial support..n az i told aisha before that i like everything in life but sometimes something make things bad 4r us n its my own experience plzz tell me u both ur aim n I LIKE U BOTH BCZ U R MY GOOD FRIENDS N PLZZ PUT UR OWN PIC I WANNA SEE UR FACES N M ALSO CHANGING MY PIC PLZZ Maazazafar
Jul 13th 2011
 
 
Itachi Maaza ! How r u ??? coz the current affairs of Karachi are soo bad. Itachi
Jul 13th 2011
 
 
Itachi Maaza what are ur hobbies mine r reading and playig compter games.:) Itachi
Jul 13th 2011
 
 
Aisha My sister is Khadija who wrote the poem trees. She is younger then me. What do want to be when you grow up Aisha
Jul 12th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Wow Aisha this iz a very nice thing...Well I also get positions but the last year of mine in 6th standard was very bad in the starting az it was the secondary class n a lil bit hard also...But at the end Finally i got 3rd position with 91 %..but in the tests i got 95% n hu iz ur sis plzz tell me about her Maazazafar
Jul 12th 2011
 
 
Aisha I got third position last time.(it is true u can even ask my sis). I am excellent in studies as well co-curricular activites. Aisha
Jul 12th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Aisha actually I like everything in life but sometimes something make the things dislike 4r us.......And tell me about urself about ur studies and plzz tell me that u got positions in ur class or not? Maazazafar
Jul 11th 2011
 
 
Aisha So Maaza wat are your likes and dislikes. I am in eighth but from next term i will be in pre O levels Aisha
Jul 11th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx Aisha n u can b my friend yrr......Yes this is my reall .....Hanea i m in 7th grade in O level system n its also very hard Maazazafar
Jul 10th 2011
 
 
Itachi Maaza thanks for ur appreciation i like u too Itachi
Jul 10th 2011
 
 
Itachi Maaza i am from karachi too....:) in which class r u i m in Grade 6 it is soooo hard coz our final exams come from board in Abu Dhabi.. Itachi
Jul 10th 2011
 
 
Aisha Hello Maaza nice story i like it. Can i be your friend. I am just of your age and i live in Qatar and i am Pakistani . Is this your real name Aisha
Jul 9th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanku So much Haneea ...n u know 1 thing that u are so sweet bcz u alwayz like everything of mine and U ALWAYZ SUPPORT ME ....Thanku so much to b my gud and v.nice friend m very thankful to u... Maazazafar
Jul 7th 2011
 
 
Itachi Nyc pic Maaza Itachi
Jul 7th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar ITS OK DEAR I WAS ALSO BLIND 4R MY STORyy...Welll i m 12 yers old n will b 13 this Dec 6 and i live in Karachi Dastagir Federel B area Maazazafar
Jul 6th 2011
 
 
magisha Thanks alot for ending the fight.I am also very very sorry.and please tell me your age and where do you live. Magisha
Jul 6th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar OK MAGISHA JUST LEAVE THE FIGHT AND BE MY FRIEND AND IF U DIDNT LIKE THE STORY SO ITS OK..........BE FRIENDS.......4RM MY SELF I AM SORRY...!!!!!!!!!! Maazazafar
Jul 4th 2011
 
 
magisha And stop your DRAMA about dishearting me :) Magisha
Jun 29th 2011
 
 
magisha Hi there well i don't like this story because it was not having anything special.As we all have grandparents when our grand parents die we have sad heart for a little while but we are back at our daily timetable.This is the most common thing in all of us. reply me Magisha
Jun 27th 2011
 
 
Itachi Mazza what s ur age and i see people are dishearting u.That is very bad .But i think MOST of them like it.DO YOU? Itachi
Jun 21st 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Hello Magisha thanku so much that u read my boring n stupid story.BUT THIS STORY IS BORING 4R ELDERS NOT 4R KIDS n I have written this story only 4r my younger sisters bcz they like this type of stories.AND I DONT KNOW WHY most of the people are dishearting me ........plzz reply Magisha with an answer. Maazazafar
Jun 20th 2011
 
 
magisha I DONT KNOW WHY VSHINE TEAM HAS SELECTED THIS STORY AS WINNEER FOR APRIL.MAYBE THERE IS NO OTHER STORY.WELL IN MY OPINION THIS IS A VERY BORING AND STUPID STORY. Magisha
Jun 14th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx Kutie Maazazafar
Jun 6th 2011
 
 
Aleena Good story...! Aleena
Jun 4th 2011
 
 
Aleena Thanks yar!!!!!!!!!! Aleena
May 28th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Aleena the jpg and gpn photos are those which are valid in our computer .if u want to change ur pic simply copy any image 4rm the internet in ur computer and then go on the settings and clik the browse button to change ur pic. Maazazafar
May 27th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Actually MOMO i win the story so that today i have got my DOLLAR GIFT HAMPER 4rm VSHINE TEAM. Maazazafar
May 27th 2011
 
 
Aleena Then where i can find jpg and pgn pics???? please tell! Aleena
May 27th 2011
 
 
Maryam Maaza which gift do u get? Maryam
May 27th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Aleena actually u have to use the jpg and gpn pics other pics are not allowed. Maazazafar
May 27th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx Dear Zobi..........:)(Zoha) Maazazafar
May 27th 2011
 
 
zoha Awesome...story maaza! keep it up. Zoha
May 27th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx Dear Cousin Munazza Maazazafar
May 27th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx Dear VShine Team for giving me a wonderful gift.I am so Happy. Maazazafar
May 27th 2011
 
 
Munazza Beautiful story Munazza
May 27th 2011
 
 
Aleena Thanks yar! but yar whenever I go on settings and click on picture and upload a file they always say that " only JPG and GPN pictures are uploaded! Aleena
May 26th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Dear Aleena:just go on the top of the page and click on settings there u will find an option of picture just clik it and change ur pic 4rm browz Maazazafar
May 26th 2011
 
 
KAINAT VRY NICE STORY....EXCELLENT...KEEP IT UP Kainat
May 26th 2011
 
 
Aleena Maaza can you plz tell me that how have you change your profile picture???? please reply! Aleena
May 24th 2011
 
 
Kainat Excellent! Kainat
May 22nd 2011
 
 
subha It's just ok....:-\ Subha
May 19th 2011
 
 
Anabia Wot a cute story it iz,the small children will like it alot.And i also like it. Anabia
May 19th 2011
 
 
Maryam Ur welz maaza dear Maryam
May 15th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar If Saniya u did'nt like my story so plzz dont comment bcz my story iz not paintless it has feelings thats whaY other like it,it shows u dont have ay emotion or feelingsS well THANX 4R DISHEARTING ME.............:) Maazazafar
May 14th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanxxxx MOMO now u r also on Vsine kool n thanx alott MOMO... Maazazafar
May 14th 2011
 
 
Maryam It's 2 nice! keep it up maaza! Maryam
May 13th 2011
 
 
Itachi I Live in Abu Dhabi Itachi
May 12th 2011
 
 
Saniya This is the most pointless story I have ever read or am likely to read ever. It is beyond my imagination how it was awarded the prize. Perhaps it was a random pick? Saniya
May 12th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Hmmmm kool but Haneea where iz U.A.E i mean in Sharjah,dUBAI,Abu Dhabi where do u live..@? Maazazafar
May 12th 2011
 
 
Itachi I m 11 years old i live in UAE But I M A PAKISTANI Itachi
May 11th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx Haneea Dear .I live in Karachi,Dastagir F.B Area n u? How old are you?Thanx alot:) Maazazafar
May 10th 2011
 
 
Itachi Maaza NYC story i like it !!!!!!!! And i like fantasy stories too where do u live??? Itachi
May 9th 2011
 
 
Narmeen Congrats Maaza Narmeen
May 8th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx n my age iz 12 Maazazafar
May 6th 2011
 
 
Aleena Good and congrats! Aleena
May 6th 2011
 
 
angel Hi i think u want to try again and win more prizes Angel
May 5th 2011
 
 
Sana I wont say its an excellent story, but nice try. Whatsur age, Maaza? Sana
May 5th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Exactly Mohsin u r ryt i was also not expecting that i would b the winner.. Maazazafar
May 4th 2011
 
 
Mohsin This story was choosen for win by the luck! Mohsin
May 3rd 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Ohh so nice of u Kainat thanx alot for liking me.:) Maazazafar
May 3rd 2011
 
 
angel Hi im not zoha im kainat areena's class fellow and this baby iz very cute that's why i select it n u dont worry i change my name soon thiz name iz select my sis.i want to tell u that u r vry nice Angel
May 3rd 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Ya i know Izza that time i didnt understand that hu iz she thats why i said that.Thanx imane,Mehwish and MY DEAREST SIS ANABIA thanx alot friendzzz thanx alot. Maazazafar
May 3rd 2011
 
 
Izza Maaza..! angel's real name is Kainat & she is my class fellow...in ASS 10th grade...I know her very well..... Izza
May 2nd 2011
 
 
Mehwish Congratulations !!!!!!! nyc story=) Mehwish
May 2nd 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Areena Baaji Ur email address i want it.. Maazazafar
May 2nd 2011
 
 
Pivak Congrates maaza... :) Pivak
May 2nd 2011
 
 
Juvariya Congrats Appi u deserve to be the winner.As u r my sis.....m proud to be ur sister.And i love u alot.... Juvariya
May 2nd 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Dear VSHINE TEAM,please tell me when i will recieve my gift?....plzz tell the date? ADMINITATOR VSHINE MAGAZINE. Maazazafar
May 2nd 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Oops sorry..iwas not expecting that i would b the winner...but i m. Maazazafar
May 2nd 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx alot Zernab and i was expecting that i would be the winner.Thanx alotttttt..:) Maazazafar
May 1st 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx angel.I think u r my own friend Zoha. M I ryt plzz tell me bcz she also like the pic n name u have? plzz tell me. Maazazafar
May 1st 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Well areena baaji ur name iz also new 4r me n cute also n plzz give me ur email address plzzz Maazazafar
May 1st 2011
 
 
angel Very nice story keep it up and all the best for next time Angel
May 1st 2011
 
 
Zernab CONGRATULATIONS Maaza on being a winner! You deserve to win because you have written an excellent story. Please comment on my stories on page 3 and on my poem BLESSINGS OF GOD page 7. Zernab
May 1st 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Yuppie m a winner of this monthhhh Wow this iz first tme n i m so happy.Thanku Vshine team thaku soo much for making me the winner Maazazafar
Apr 30th 2011
 
 
 Areena Maaza.! your name is new to me as it is very cute..! by the way..good story...keep it up & strive for a better future..! Areena
Apr 30th 2011
 
 
 Areena Aisha..! no one is spare of mistakes in this world..am i right? so we should forgive her & hope that Bint Waseem won't mind..! Areena
Apr 30th 2011
 
 
 Areena Maaza..! you mis-understood..! ''Bint" is an arabic word which means "daughter of"....by the way...the real name of Bint-e-Waseem is "Zuha waseem"...but you know, it's ok..! Areena
Apr 30th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Oops sorry plzz tell me ur reall name Bint Waseem n m really sorry Maazazafar
Apr 30th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Oops sorry plzz tell me ur reall name n m really sorry Maazazafar
Apr 30th 2011
 
 
Aisha Maaza Bint waseem is a girl.Bint waseem means "daughter of waseem.'' Aisha
Apr 29th 2011
 
 
MaazaZafar Thanx waseem!!!! well how old r u bcz i dont know wt to call u waseem bhai or waseem? Maazazafar
Apr 28th 2011
 
 
Bint waseem Nyc! Bint Waseem
Apr 27th 2011
 
 

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