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Zerwah Gul
Zerwah Gul
Cresent Academy (school)
A Surprising Moment
Published On Feb 13th 2014
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"Dinners ready come on you both", screamed aunt rubina. ali and alina came rushing sat on the dining table. Where were you both I’m tired of your stupid behavior. Actually ali and alina were siblings there parents died in a car accident and since then are living with their moron aunt.
One day they both were playing in the garden when suddenly a screeching voice called them inside. "hmmmm, I must say how dirty you both look. Get changed at once and stop starring at me creepers. "They, with their heads down went to their rooms get changed.
 After that they cleaned the entire house for the guests who were arriving in the evening. That very moment the blue sky turned into black and heavy rain fall from the sky. Aunt rubina called the guests and told them about the whole situation.
She was just about to scream for the children when she heard their laughter she went in her balcony and saw that the children were playing in the garden, suddenly something strange began to happen to her as if she is going to burst. She gave a scream but this time scream of joy.
She went in the garden and hugged the children and start playing with them. It was the most surprising moment for the children.
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Comments 15
Shaheer Me eitheir. BTW I have no right to speak but still I am. What do you mean by fools never understand. (Bcuz I myskef is a fool) lol jk Shaheer
Feb 17th 2015
 
 
RAFIA Quite intresting Rafia
Mar 6th 2014
 
 
RAFIA Quite intresting Rafia
Mar 6th 2014
 
 
Arooba Hmmm cool very logitive story Arooba
Mar 3rd 2014
 
 
zerwah Aunt rubina hugged them because she about her past childhood Zerwah
Mar 2nd 2014
 
 
Anusha Was aunt Rubina got mad Anusha
Feb 28th 2014
 
 
inshal Api tell at home what was happened to aunt Rubina Inshal
Feb 21st 2014
 
 
hani Its very interesting Hani
Feb 21st 2014
 
 
Souson Why what happened to aunt rubina? Why did she hug them both with joy? Souson
Feb 20th 2014
 
 
Souson Why what happened to aunt rubina? Why did she hug them both with joy? Souson
Feb 20th 2014
 
 
zerwah Fools never understand such things Zerwah
Feb 20th 2014
 
 
hani Love it upi Hani
Feb 20th 2014
 
 
mahrukh Agreed with Inshal Mahrukh
Feb 16th 2014
 
 
inshal I cant understand Inshal
Feb 16th 2014
 
 
Laibah Huh? Laibah
Feb 15th 2014
 
 

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