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In The Jaws Of A Shark
Published On Feb 13th 2014
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In The Jaws of a Shaaark
Once upon a time there lived a boy, James about 15 years old in Florida USA. He loved surfing with his buds on the Florida Keys. He learnt surfing from his dad when he was 10 years old and after his dad passed away James now 13 had a passion to become a champion surfer.
Florida, USA: 11 march, 2001: 2:15 PM
Today was the day, it was finally here. James and his friends headed for the beach where a huge tournament was to be held to crown the surfing sensation. First up were the three friends plus James. Everything was in the grove when just out of nowhere a huge wave swept James away to sea.
Washed Away: 3:30 PM
About an hour or so had passed since James had been washed away to sea.  He was a really drowsy but something in the distance caught his attention. It was grey, I was fierce, it was a “Shaaark” cried James.  By then the shark had gotten hold of James’ right leg. James could feel the pain rushing through him. He tried to get loose but the shark’s grip was too tight.
Saved at Last: 5:10 PM
Just then out of the depths of the sea, came some dolphins. They came close to James and he took hold of them. With a mighty heave James was free! About 1 km away from land the dolphins together helped James to get to the beach. There he got admitted to the hospital with a broken leg and some cuts.
Within three months he was fit to surf again with his pals and continue his dream to become the best surfer ever known. And all thanks to the dolphins because without their help he wouldn’t have been able to survive the jaws of the shark!


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Comments 4
H@f$@h Thnx All :) H@f$@h
Feb 21st 2014
inshal Very well written Inshal
Feb 16th 2014
KHAN Very well written 8-) Khan
Feb 16th 2014
Ushna Well written :) Ushna
Feb 14th 2014

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