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Mohammad Aashir Siddiqui
Mohammad Aashir Siddiqui
Beaconhouse School System
The Three Brothers
Published On Feb 6th 2014
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Once upon a time there were 3 brothers and their family. Their names were Christopher, abid and john. One day the 3 brothers were playing hide and seek in their house. John was the seeker and he was searching for his brothers in the house. After 5 minutes he found abid and john. Only Christopher was not found.10 minutes were passed and there was no sign of Christopher. "Where is Christopher", abid said sadly."I don't know", said john. They both started searching for him. They saw in his room, in the kitchen, in the TV launch, in the cupboard, in the store and in the garage. In fact he was in the kitchen's draw. They both started crying."Where is my brother", john said. "I don't know", said abid. We should find him in the kitchen’s draw", said abid. "Yeh" said john. (They both went there).When they saw in it there was a small elephant."Oh no, Christopher is lost" said john. They both started crying.
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Comments 12
jasmine You could write second part Jasmine
Jun 3rd 2015
 
 
jasmine You could write second part Jasmine
Jun 3rd 2015
 
 
Umair Liked Umair
Jan 9th 2015
 
 
Tooba No ending not pleased Tooba
May 26th 2014
 
 
Amal It has no ending it doesn't make sense BUT its good for a eight year old Amal
Feb 12th 2014
 
 
unaiza cannot understand it... lacks the sequenced formation and the true theme of the story. Hope you improve . Unaiza
Feb 11th 2014
 
 
Minahil It doesnt have any ending and its foolish you should not be so rude with Amn even I couldnt get the point of the story . Minahil
Feb 9th 2014
 
 
 Shiza Is this story complete??????????????????? Shiza
Feb 9th 2014
 
 
mohammad aashir Please,please and please like it Mohammad Aashir
Feb 8th 2014
 
 
mohammad aashir Please,please and please like it Mohammad Aashir
Feb 8th 2014
 
 
mohammad aashir Beacause amn is uneducated child Mohammad Aashir
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
KHAN I cannot understand it................. Khan
Feb 7th 2014
 
 

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