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The Jolly One
Published On Feb 6th 2014
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I went to a green and wide forest
Located in Africa’s west
There I saw a monkey
Who looked quite funky
It was swinging up and down
From tip to toe it was coloured brown
It was hanging by tail on a tree
What a fun moment it was to see
It even ate bananas, a full bunch
I think it was his lunch
It also climbed a tree with leaves coloured yellow
What a naughty fellow
I really wanted to give him a hug
But I couldn’t go forward because there was a bug
Well the monkey had tiny feet
And they were not at all neat
It had no manners
It even broke to banners
It made a cheeky sound
And moved his hands round and round
Well the monkey had a lot of fun
Playing in the hot and burning sun.
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Bushra THANK YOU FOR THE COMMETS GUYS Bushra
Jul 17th 2014
 
 
sofia It is good thats a good effort u see my one poems are never putted on vshine :( Sofia
Feb 11th 2014
 
 
MARYAM It was and rhyming.... Maryam
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
shehreen It seems quite funny but a little more effort will make your poetry good one Shehreen
Feb 6th 2014
 
 

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