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Mohammad Aashir Siddiqui
Mohammad Aashir Siddiqui
Beaconhouse School System
The Girl And Her Mother
Published On Feb 4th 2014
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Once upon there was a man named Julia. She was a very clever and bad girl. One day her mother decided to go to Mount Everest to see how beautiful and High Mountain it is. Days past and they didn't go there. One day Julia angrily tells to her mother that she wanted to go Mount Everest so she remembers what she has said so she decided to go to Mount Everest and after that they went to Mount Everest. "Oh, wow how high and beautiful mountain it is", Julia said. "Oh, wow you are right, Julia" ,her mother said. Her mother always said to her that "don't slide on a mountain It is very dangerous". Days went by and they always went to Mount Everest and Julia did always listen to her mother on the mountain. But one day Julia tried her best to slide on a mountain and one day she did it. "No, Julia. It's very dangerous. The rocks in the mountain can hurt you and you can die", her mother said. But she did not listen to her mother. The next day when they got on the mountain. Julia started doing slide. "No, Julia." Her mother shouted angrily. In a second a big rock came falling on her and in no time she died.
Moral of the lesson:
We should hear our parents.
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Comments 18
aayla Ma na hil, baat tou sahi he. good vocabulary could've been used Aayla
May 16th 2014
 
 
manahil Such a silly story. aayla i am in ur favor +beside grammar mistakes there r also lack of good vocabulary Manahil
Mar 26th 2014
 
 
aayla Too many grammar problems Aayla
Feb 23rd 2014
 
 
Laibah Hehe julia was man. but still it was good story Laibah
Feb 15th 2014
 
 
Minahil Man or girl????????? Minahil
Feb 9th 2014
 
 
manahil In my view people to "CLIMB ON" mountain rather than "GO TO" mountain specially when it comes up to mount everest. + is it really so easy to "GO" to mount everest that they often go. hahaha quite funny Manahil
Feb 9th 2014
 
 
aayla Why all stories start is "ONCE UPON THE TIME" Hahaha Aayla
Feb 9th 2014
 
 
mohammad aashir Please like it Mohammad Aashir
Feb 9th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Goood story mashalllah and you are veryyyyy veryyyyy right that we should listen to our parents :)i was veryy sad hearing that julia died her mother would be sad of courseee Hafsa
Feb 8th 2014
 
 
Laiba AWESOME! you are right we should listen to our parents. Laiba
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
MARYAM Yes we should listen to our parents and not disobey them. Maryam
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
mohammad aashir Please ,please and please like it Mohammad Aashir
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
mohammad aashir Please ,please and please like it Mohammad Aashir
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
mohammad aashir Please like it Mohammad Aashir
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
mohammad aashir A mistake Mohammad Aashir
Feb 7th 2014
 
 
KHAN Good story. Khan
Feb 6th 2014
 
 
khawaja muhammad If you said that there was a man then how can you she was a bad girl Khawaja Muhammad
Feb 6th 2014
 
 
mohammad aashir Yes,we should listen our parents Mohammad Aashir
Feb 5th 2014
 
 

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