Once upon a time, there was a girl named Nimra. She had one small brother named Ahmad and one sister named Yasmin. Nimra was a very naughty girl. She never listened to anyone, hit her sister and when her brother was taking a swing she pushed her brother and let him fall down. One day her mother told her good habits by the stories of Muhammad (Peace be upon him), how he preached Islam, how the tribe of Quraysh treated him. She was sad and started crying about what she had done before so her mother with a smile said to her “You can now on wards become a good girl and never misbehave with any one and most important you can ask for forgiveness from Allah, Our Lord is the most Merciful.”Then she said sorry to everyone with whom she had misbehaved .And never did anything bad and now she was a very good girl that her siblings also liked her the most.
Everybody, let me make it clear that I am not saying that the story is BAD or anything. I said it's good.Everybody has a right to their opinion, in fact, it is good to get a critical opinion because that makes you look at your mistakes and improve your work.