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Hafsa Irfan
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A Beautiful Day At The Funfair (part 1)
Published On Feb 2nd 2014
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YUMNA and her granddad were walking on the street and suddenly they came across a notice board. It was about a funfair that day at 4:00pm at Peterswood street number five. YUMNA saw the watch and told her grandfather that half an hour left for the funfair to start. She asked her grandfather “would you take me to the funfair, please?” Her grandfather said “I will of course take you, my sweetheart”. So they waited for the yellow bus that went to the funfair at Peterswood . At last, a yellow bus appeared with some passengers sitting in it and they sat in it and went to the funfair.
When they reached the fun fair, YUMNA ran inside holding her grandfathers hand. Some people were playing golf and other people were sitting in the boats having boat rides along the lake. The whole lake area was covered with big yellow shimmering lights. The people who were playing golf were looking happy. They were playing golf on the grass. YUMNA and her grandfather then came across a man with a black coat who was performing acrobats and a lot of people were looking at him. The man with the black coat was juggling with torches and was cycling on a cycle with one tyre.
Next part coming soon… if you like it I’ll post it soon as possible INSH'ALLAH! I hope V SHINE posts it. INSH'ALLAH
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Comments 8
HAFSA Nooo Hafsa
Feb 14th 2014
Irum It;s good. First time that you don't have a grammar mistake..:) Irum
Feb 14th 2014
KHAN It is very good Khan
Feb 11th 2014
HAFSA I am posting the second part Hafsa
Feb 10th 2014
mohammad aashir It's just..... correct Mohammad Aashir
Feb 9th 2014
HAFSA Pllzzzzzz Hafsa
Feb 5th 2014
Mahnoor It's nice but it's not complete so...can't say anything Mahnoor
Feb 4th 2014
HAFSA Plz comment!!!!! ayesha imran and ayesha lakho always comment first on any of the stories, articles,, and etc Hafsa
Feb 3rd 2014

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