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Syeda Tahira Iqbal
Syeda Tahira Iqbal
Ibn Seena English High School
Hide And Seek
Published On Apr 17th 2011
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April 2011

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Once there were two brothers. Ahmed the intelligent one and Ali who was really lazy. Once these brothers were invited for a birthday party. There would be lots of games and food and prizes who win the game! Ahmed who was the clever one went to the party to have fun but then on the other hand Ali went to the party because he was greedy. He wanted the gifts the prizes which would be given out if he wins the games............after sometime they reached the party. it was glorious and the best part which they both liked was the chocolate cake which was utterly delicious. After all this commotion the games started. There was one game which Ali knew he would win. It was HIDE AND SEEK. He had found the perfect place to hide when the party was on full swing..... THE PERFECT PLACE WAS THE ATTIC. He had seen a old treasure chest which was just the right size for him to hide...when the game started he went and hid. But no one had been able to find him and the game was ended and party was over. Ali tried to come outside but the chest was locked from outside. He became too frightened to see. That. Fortunately his brother looked at the chest and opened it at once. There he found Ali and then he old him that if I hadn’t opened it then you may be dead. That day Ali decided never to do that like thing again.
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Comments 12
syeda tahira Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments you do not know how much it made me happy Syeda Tahira
Nov 16th 2012
Zoya What did you get after you became a winner Zoya
Jul 15th 2012
xerac Ppppeeeerrrrfffeeeccccttttt Xerac
Nov 7th 2011
Bint waseem Gud! Bint Waseem
Sep 6th 2011
Itachi Nyc story !!!!!!!!!!!!!1what is ur age??? Itachi
Jul 10th 2011
syeda tahira Thnx fr your comments Syeda Tahira
Jun 4th 2011
syed saad Wooooooow wonderful story gives lesson to us Syed Saad
Jun 4th 2011
M@ry@m Welldone M@ry@m
May 28th 2011
Fizza Congratulations. A good moral of the story. keep up the hard work. Fizza
May 27th 2011
MaazaZafar Congrats n tell me ur age plzzz N keep it up.. Maazazafar
May 3rd 2011
Zernab CONGRATULATIONS Syeda Tahira ! Keep it up! Zernab
May 1st 2011
Menahil Cool Story Menahil
Apr 21st 2011

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