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Mahnoor Mumtaz
Mahnoor Mumtaz
Army Public School
Am I The Killer?
Published On Feb 2nd 2014
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In a beautiful, big house there lived two sisters with their parents. Their father was a very rich man and he was able to buy his daughters everything they wanted. Bella and Sasha were very much loved and were given everything they wanted, this made them proud and selfish but their parents were too busy to notice them.
One day when the two sisters, Sasha and BSealedella were playing in the garden they had a fight and it grew so much big that they stopped talking to each other and each of them started planning wicked schemes behind each other’s back. ONE DAY when they were having there dinner Bella put a cockroach in Sasha's glass. Which made Sasha scream. Many plans were laid down by the sisters but one day Bella did something so big, changed her life forever. She gave Sasha a shock by giving her the shock pen which accidently gave so much current and Sasha was taken to the hospital. Day by day her condition grew serious and day she died...Sealed
From that day onwards Bella never spoke to anyone not even her parents. Her parents grew worried about her and one day her governess found her lying in her room floor, her heart still, eyes closed, and pills by her side. She had committed suicide because she couldn't bear the question, AM I THE KILLER?
After his death her parents found a note in her drawer saying, "FORGIVE ME."
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Comments 8
Mahnoor Thankyou! i'm great soha what about you? Mahnoor
Aug 22nd 2014
Soha Hey Mahnoor, how r u? Soha
Aug 9th 2014
Marwa Excellent !! Keep it up ! You are a very good writer !! Marwa
Jul 22nd 2014
saniyah Nice story Saniyah
Jun 30th 2014
Tooba Cool Tooba
Apr 13th 2014
Munkashay Good! :) Munkashay
Feb 7th 2014
KHAN Nope you are not the killer.Good and great. Khan
Feb 3rd 2014
eman Woww..too good :) keep writng :) Eman
Feb 2nd 2014

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