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Affan Faisal
Affan Faisal
Leduc Junior High
The Abandoned House Part 1
Published On Feb 2nd 2014
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In a nice quiet colony, two kids were playing in their lawn. It was evening and the sun began to slowly disappear. The kids were playing badminton. They were both boys. Sahir was a very brave boy. He was 11 year old. On the other side his friend Samar was 10 years old but a big scared cat. Both of the boys were playing in Sahir's lawn. The both kids parents were rich and were inside the house. During they were playing their shuttlecock went through the window of the abandoned house. In the house, nobody was living. 15 years ago, an old man used to live in the house but he died. Now, people say his soul is in the house walks in the evening which is right now. "Uh oh!" stammered Samar. "Don't be such a scared cat." said Sahir. "I am not!" "Yes you are!" Sahir and Samar walked slowly towards the house. They wre both holding their hands tight in a grip. Suddenly, the door opened. "Ahhhhh!" yelled Samar. "Shhhh!" whispered Sahir. "W-w-w-h-h-o i-i-is it." stammered Samar. "Be quiet! Don't talk." said Sahir. The kids slowly went in the house and saw......
To be continued.....
It is a little short but this is an impatient part.
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Comments 11
Affan Good Affan
Nov 9th 2014
mubashra ASSLAMUALIKUM AFFAN how r u? :) :) Mubashra
Aug 23rd 2014
Aden Good!!!!!!!!!!! Aden
Aug 22nd 2014
Ashra Cool Ashra
May 12th 2014
mubashra Pakistan har gya ummmmmmmmmmmm Mubashra
Apr 5th 2014
Tooba Story is interesting..I want to read the NExt part.. Tooba
Mar 31st 2014
mubashra ASSLAM U ALIKUM Affan how r u? hope fine!!!!! well i want to say that whatever u comment on my painting i dont mind it and plz as a frnd dont say me ever sorry i hate the word sorry asking from my frndz so quickly accept my frnd request and be my best frnd :) Mubashra
Feb 21st 2014
Ashra GOOD Ashra
Feb 16th 2014
Mehdi Nice Mehdi
Feb 6th 2014
KHAN Good Khan
Feb 3rd 2014
Affan Sorry guyz, I can't write the next part because I submitted this story 1 month ago and I forget what I was gonna do in the story and the idea. Affan
Feb 2nd 2014

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