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Ayesha  Imran
Ayesha Imran
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The Twins Baby Sits The Twins (part 2)
Published On Jan 13th 2014
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THUD!
"Hey, Khadijah, did you hear that?"I asked. It was 9 o'clock and I was scared siff because of all the noises coming from the kitchen.
"Shhhh, let me see the movie, Ayesha, "Khadijah said .
I got up, snatched the remote from the table and hit the off button."Hey, give it back, "Khadijah protested.
"No, Khadijah, first we have to check on the kids, after all, they're our responsibility, right? What if they're crying?" I said firmly.
Khadijah sighed, got up, and said, "Okay, okay, we'll do it, but then please can we get back to the movie afterwards?"
"Sure, but first let's go to the kitchen to check out the noises, " I replied.
We went out of the living room, and I opened the door of the kitchen. As I opened the door, I saw a black figure scurrying in the kitchen. I screamed, closed the kitchen door, and hurriedly backed out, landing on top of Khadijah. As soon as I screamed, one of the twins started to cry. All of this happened in a split second. "Get off of me, Ayesha. See, because of your stupidity, the twins are awake. Let's go and check on them."Khadijah said, standing up. Me, still a little shaken from the shock, gulped and nodded and hurried up the stairs after Khadijah.
Next part is coming very soon.

 

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Comments 34
Munkashay Why? Vshine won't publish it or what?? Munkashay
Jul 18th 2014
 
 
Sara Nice but not too much nice Sara
May 19th 2014
 
 
Tooba Nice Tooba
May 12th 2014
 
 
Ayesha This story is cancelled, won't be continued. Sorryyyyyy!!! Ayesha
May 11th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Aray ayesha are you busy in shifting. you were coming to karachi right!!! now when are you posting the 3rd part of this storyyyyyyyyyyyy?????????????????????? Hafsa
Apr 11th 2014
 
 
Ayesha I always think of posting the third part, but I forget!!I'll do it ASAP Ayesha
Mar 9th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Thankyou ayesha imran! and when are you thinking to post the thirdd part of this story. you posted this part in january and now its march!!!!! Hafsa
Mar 7th 2014
 
 
Arooba Oh and i am fine thank god Arooba
Mar 7th 2014
 
 
Ayesha I am fine!!!!!! WBU Ayesha
Mar 6th 2014
 
 
Ayesha I am fine!!!!!! WBU Ayesha
Mar 6th 2014
 
 
Ayesha I am fine!!!!!! WBU Ayesha
Mar 6th 2014
 
 
Arooba Really good ayesha imran . oh and how are you? Arooba
Mar 5th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Yes I did and I will be ur friend :) Ayesha
Feb 15th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Mashallah ayesha imran did you read my comment Hafsa
Jan 28th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Thankss alot:) Hafsa
Jan 27th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Everybody, I am so sorry, I have been busy for the last few days as you might have heard that I am staying in Karachi for ever and ever!! (did you hear the news? My dad is working in Karachi and now we'll never go to America, except to visit our friends sometimes. And we are very very happy, because all our relations are here. )Anyways, I will publish the next part as soon as possible.;) Ayesha
Jan 27th 2014
 
 
Arbish When you are posting another part ? plz ayesha tell me :P Arbish
Jan 27th 2014
 
 
Irum That's fine with me, Hafsa. WBU, Ayesha Imran? Irum
Jan 26th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Ayesha imran plz send me friend request i wanna be your friend:) lets be friends lets all of us appoligize for all the babyish rubbish fights:)plz lets be friends all the vshine people. Vshine is not a place to fight and Allah (SWT) has also said that dont fight!!! and anotherthing that I think that all these fights are babyish and everyone plzzzzzz forgive me for all the fights i have done with you on vshine:) ( waisay i have just done 1 or 2 fights till now on vshine:)) who is now ready to be friends plz all of the people commenton what i have written plz. Now lets be good muslims:) And INSHALLAH we all will be friends:) Hafsa
Jan 23rd 2014
 
 
HAFSA When is the next part coming:) Hafsa
Jan 23rd 2014
 
 
Laibah Aww........... this part should have been longer, anyway, still interesting Laibah
Jan 22nd 2014
 
 
HAFSA Hello ayesha????? Hafsa
Jan 18th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Thank you Fatima and Irza Ayesha
Jan 18th 2014
 
 
Maryam Your welcome Maryam
Jan 17th 2014
 
 
irza You are such a good story teller. your lucky Allah gave you a very clever brain Irza
Jan 17th 2014
 
 
Fatima Nice story but plz try to make the parts longer Fatima
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
Hiba My pleasure Ayesha :) Hiba
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Oh nice cant wait for next part:) Hafsa
Jan 16th 2014
 
 
Ayesha Thank you, Hiba. All you comments are very nice;) Thank you Maryam, And Hafsa, yes, this is real, me and Khadijah Baby sat our brothers for real. and boy, was it a hair-raising adventurous night! Thanks Saamia Ayesha
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
saamia Ooooh so sweet stry Saamia
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
saamia Ooooh so sweet stry Saamia
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Ayessha veryy good keep iit up:)i cant wait for the next part to come.plz post it in 2 days pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ayesha i wannna read this story. and is this story real? Hafsa
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
Maryam Nice story Maryam
Jan 13th 2014
 
 
Hiba Omg , I just love this story. Can't wait for the next part :). Hiba
Jan 13th 2014
 
 

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