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Aqsa Amjad
Aqsa Amjad
Beacon House School System
The Fabulous Find Outers
Published On Jan 13th 2014
Total Comments : 6
Total Views :  692

Rank 7 Out of 10
Sara, Ali, Zainab, Ahmed tip toed in the haunted house. This was because who was near this house heard screaming, scratching noises. These 4 were fabulous find outers and solved much mystery. That night they went in the house. Sara said suddenly 'stop. We have to go different way'. Sara went straight, Zainab on right, Ali backwards and Ahmed on left. The screaming sounds were getting louder as sars headed towards corridor. She called her friends and at end of the corridor they started searching, Ali found a small locket of Aunty Belinda who was missing as she went in the house. Four of all followed the staircase. There was room there. As Ahmed and Ali broke the door, they were fascinated to see people who were missing mysteriously in the house before 1 month alright. Everybody was blank no one knew about the man who kept them here. just then Sara found a locket of Mr. and Mrs. Kaminar who died in the bomb blast and Jason, their son died two days after.'' no it was just a drama'' ''Jason you '' screamed Zainab. Yes i did it because of you people my parents died someone of did the bomb blast that's why I capture people and kill them. Jason took the gun out but police caught him. Everybody was happy the mystery was solved. Thanks to fabulous find outers.
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Comments 6
aqsa Thanks Aqsa
Mar 22nd 2014
Anusha Nice Anusha
Jan 28th 2014
MARYAM Good Maryam
Jan 27th 2014
irza Lovely Irza
Jan 17th 2014
Tooba Awesome Tooba
Jan 16th 2014
HAFSA Good story mashallah Hafsa
Jan 15th 2014

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