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Mahrukh Kafeel
Mahrukh Kafeel
The Punjab School
My Doll
Published On Jan 13th 2014
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I have a doll
she likes to crawl
she wears black gown
she has a crown
she goes to school
she smells like rose.
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Anonymous Come on mahrukh it's your own poem, and it's nice keep trying! Anonymous
Jul 6th 2014
 
 
Junaid @mahruk... with whom r u suggesting? Junaid
Feb 15th 2014
 
 
KHAN Why are you commenting that you need more practice? Khan
Jan 26th 2014
 
 
mahrukh Your poem is good do more practicing that you should write stories Mahrukh
Jan 25th 2014
 
 
mahrukh This poem is a good idea but you should do more practice . this poem give us no idea . Mahrukh
Jan 13th 2014
 
 

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