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Liza Khan
Liza Khan
Ladybird Grammar School
Akello
Published On Jan 13th 2014
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There was a little girl named AKELLO who used to live in a village. She was only 10 years old and she was very kind. In evening she used to go at the river and play with her friends.
One day AKELLO and her friends were playing hide and seek. AKELLO was the one who had to catch her friends. When they started playing AKELLO'S friend hid behind the trees. While playing AKELLO suddenly fell in the river. The river currents were so high that she couldn't swim. When she called for help her friends came out and ran to call her mother.
When her mother came, she tried to take AKELLO out of the water but she couldn't. Then she called one of her friend whose son was a swimmer. His name was JOMO. The friend came with her son and he went in the water. First when he tried to go near AKELLO he couldn't swim because the river currents were very high second time he tried to swim faster and when he reached AKELLO, he took her out of the water and everyone were save.
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Comments 11
Tooba Nice Tooba
Mar 31st 2014
 
 
MARYAM It was good Maryam
Jan 27th 2014
 
 
hibba Wow Hibba
Jan 20th 2014
 
 
irza Gud story but not very discriptive. Irza
Jan 17th 2014
 
 
Abdullah You are a good story writer. Abdullah
Jan 15th 2014
 
 
Anam Vvery nice Anam
Jan 15th 2014
 
 
Mehwish Goood effort :) Mehwish
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
Liza Thank You Liza
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
saamia NICE Saamia
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
HAFSA Goood Hafsa
Jan 14th 2014
 
 
Affan I like the names of people and nice story Affan
Jan 13th 2014
 
 

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