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Areeba  Imtiaz
Areeba Imtiaz
Universal Private School
Chocolate Room
Published On Feb 2nd 2014
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Ah! What a beautiful room it was. Everywhere was chocolate. The trees, bushes, grasses of candies, but wait a chocolate waterfall! What an amazing sight it was...
 What was that? A boat of strawberry candy!?!How delicious it was. And the fruits that are hung on the tree were the most delicious fruits I've ever eaten, and the grass, they were just so delectable I couldn’t stop eating. They tasted like sweet-mint. And I was just going taste the chocolate river when someone just! "WAKE UP" said mom. Ah what a dream I should've tasted the chocolate river
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jasmine I'm not interested in candies but I am in chocolate........btw nice story. Jasmine
Jun 3rd 2015
 
 
Tooba Yumyyyy Tooba
Apr 13th 2014
 
 
sofia Like charlie and the choclate factory eh like it .keep up the good work Sofia
Feb 4th 2014
 
 
KHAN Yum yum Khan
Feb 3rd 2014
 
 
Mahnoor Yummyyyyyyyyyyyyy Mahnoor
Feb 2nd 2014
 
 

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