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Raiyan Ahmed
Raiyan Ahmed
Beaconhouse Middle Ii
I'll Be Back
Published On Jan 5th 2014
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January 2014

Rank 9 Out of 10
Kevin was a very bold and exploratory boy; in fact he was only an audacious boy. Brave was a quality only he believed that he had. He was a big fearful in reality and dreadfully scared of ghosts, spirits and other phantomlike creatures. Apart from being exploratory, his personal qualities included being naughty, not too studious, bullying small children and roaming freely in the wide streets near his house. Serious scolding by his teachers at school didn’t really influence him to change most probably because his father was representing a really eminent company and could also be the CEO of it.
One bright, sunny day on weekend, Kevin was roaming in the wide streets according to his routine when he felt something peculiar. All the streets which were crowded and lively yesterday today became quiet and calmed down. He stopped for a moment and then continued on his routine without any hesitation. Kevin roamed and roamed whole afternoon without feeling thirsty or hungry. At the time of sun fall, he was asked to return home by his maid but he refused obdurately. A moment later, when the maid was gone, Kevin felt that somebody was calling him. As he turned to take a look behind, everything got black and Kevin saw a tall man with stretched elastic hands, red brutal eyes and legless bottom. He flew in the air and came right in front of Kevin. He could screech at the top of his breath but he was too scared to do that. He was actually gone numb and frozen right on the very spot. The spirit addressed him in a very light and whispering voice; it commanded Kevin to change his obnoxious behavior into a nice one. These words were constantly addressed three times into Kevin’s ear. After the communication, spirit vanished and the blackness faded away. The numb boy was carried back to home where he turned normal again. All his family members frequently asked the reason for this accident but the boy even after knowing the truth, continued to lie and somehow managed to change the topic of the family discussion.
The weekend was over and the schooldays had started. Kevin was ready and rode off to school as soon as he heard the school bus horn. He had forgotten about the accident that took place at the weekend and continued with his appalling behavior but not for long. As soon as the half day was over and the history lesson started, he started feeling odd. At a blink of an eye the whole class vanished and the only thing written on the board was “CHANGE YOURSELF”. The environment was about to darken when Kevin screamed and turned it normal, the class including teacher stared astoundingly at him and the teacher took him to the office after checking his fever. He had high fever in school but as he returned home his fever vanished into thin air. After those days Kevin continuously had these bizarre feelings that made his temperature high for couple of minutes. His parents were starting to seriously worry about him and finally took him to a professional psychologist who failed to suggest anything.
It was too much for Kevin now; he was unable to tolerate these feelings. He had to change, and he did. He focused on all the positive things that could bring a change to his behavior; he respected elders, didn’t bother to bully small children, focused on his studies and didn’t roam in the streets too much. The plan succeeded and a new Kevin emerged with all the good qualities that a good person should have. That night when Kevin slept, in his dreams the spirit came again but this time in a form of a clean, smart looking man. He thanked Kevin for changing and also said that whenever his behavior will change into bad, He’ll be back.
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Comments 7
Hareem It was an awesome story!!!!!Also congrats!!!!! Hareem
Mar 1st 2014
Yawar Good story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yawar
Feb 28th 2014
Yawar Good story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yawar
Feb 28th 2014
Soha Great and congratz Soha
Feb 16th 2014
Amna OMG!!!! It is awesome story............congrats Raiyan Amna
Feb 14th 2014
afifah Hey congrats! good story. Afifah
Feb 9th 2014
MARYAM It was nice congrats on being a winner!! Maryam
Feb 7th 2014

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