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Zahaab Rehman
Zahaab Rehman
Fazaia Inter College
Magic Pills!
Published On Dec 27th 2013
Total Comments : 35
Total Views :  804
15 People Like this!

December 2013

Rank 9 Out of 10
Once upon a time there was a boy named Ali. He was not very good in studies and always thought of ways to pass the exams easily. One day his friend told him that there lives a man at the end of the city who has magic pills for any purpose. Ahmed thought of going to him and asking for magic pills which could make him intelligent and clever. He went to that man and asked for the pills which could make him clever. The old man gave him a bright yellow coloured pill. He ate that and gave his school test in which he got full marks. The next day he went to the old man asking for pills which could make him stronger. The old man gave him a orange coloured pill. The next day he got rid of the bullies who were bullying his friend. That afternoon, he went to the old man and asked him that what the secret of the magic pills was. The man took out a pill and said that open it and see for yourself. The boy opened the pill it was empty. The boy asked the old man what this meant. He said that when you passed the test with full marks and fought with the bullies it was not the magic of the pills but it was your own talent. The reason you were not able to use it before is that you weren't confident enough. So you asked me for the pills and you thought that it was all done because of the magic pills. Remember that there is no such thing as magic in the world all you have to do is to be confident in yourself and you will succeed.
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Comments 35
Naaemah She's teasing ya!! lolx Naaemah
May 9th 2014
zahaab So patriot u think its stupid ok its ur choice! Zahaab
May 1st 2014
Tooba First a fall congrats and the second thing its lovely Tooba
Apr 22nd 2014
Naaemah Congratz zahaab! for getting first position in the class Naaemah
Mar 26th 2014
laiba It looks like if u gonna be second enid blyton ...who will teach ethics by the stupid fables...........lolx Laiba
Mar 7th 2014
hibba When did u get the gift and hamper and what was in it ??? Hibba
Mar 3rd 2014
zahaab Manhil thanks for the idea Zahaab
Feb 12th 2014
manahil Zahaab akli story ka nam rakna"Aajao aajao koi nahi hai? " (this story will get 43 like as every student of class will like it +mam wajeeha will also like it) it would be quiet hit Manahil
Feb 9th 2014
MARYAM Yes i agree it was really nice and it also gives us a lesson..... Maryam
Jan 26th 2014
MARYAM Yes i agree it was really nice and it also gives us a lesson..... Maryam
Jan 26th 2014
Ahmad Nice work. i am also a winner. Ahmad
Jan 25th 2014
aeman Congrats...i love you mind if i read it in my class?????? Aeman
Jan 23rd 2014
Naaemah Aajao aajao koi nahi hai? Hehe wish I had a camera hota hai Naaemah
Jan 21st 2014
Naaemah Aajao aajao koi nahi hai? Hehe wish I had a camera hota hai Naaemah
Jan 21st 2014
Tooba Welldone!!!i mean.... awesomeee!!!! Tooba
Jan 19th 2014
manahil Hahaha u still cheated Manahil
Jan 19th 2014
zahaab Manahil i didn't cheat from kung fu panda ! Don't be jealous Ahjumma! Zahaab
Jan 18th 2014
manahil Zahaab kung fu panda hi cheating it is said that "there is nothing, special until you don't make it special" but still "jukaveyo".i will tell you your cheating in class Manahil
Jan 17th 2014
sana Interesting Sana
Jan 15th 2014
Naaemah Cool zahaab ;) Naaemah
Jan 15th 2014
suhaib Nice Suhaib
Jan 15th 2014
Ayesha Haha Hafsa . You also comment n everything dear! Don't feel left out. Just kidding:) Ayesha
Jan 14th 2014
zahaab Thanks guys! I am new here and this was my first time writing and i was really afraid that if someone will like this or not Zahaab
Jan 13th 2014
Affan Very nice Affan
Jan 12th 2014
Hiba Congratz, nicely written :) Hiba
Jan 12th 2014
Musaib Congratzzzzzz by the way NIXXXXXX :) Musaib
Jan 11th 2014
aqsa Nice Aqsa
Jan 9th 2014
KHAN Gud congratulations for being a winner Khan
Jan 8th 2014
HAFSA What?? ayesha imran and ayesha imran you comment on every story and everything. mash'ALLAH:) Hafsa
Jan 6th 2014
hibba Im also in 7th grade in isl :) like ur story :) Hibba
Jan 5th 2014
hibba Hey nice but too short :) Hibba
Jan 5th 2014
Bushra Good story and nice job done to win Bushra
Jan 5th 2014
tazmeen Hmm...nice thought on this one but you should give more details to it its a good work! keep it up! Tazmeen
Jan 3rd 2014
Raiyan Interesting but ended quickly i really appreciate Raiyan
Jan 3rd 2014
Ayesha Uh.. um.. .. ahem .. hello Ayesha
Dec 31st 2014

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